Review of chapter "Chapter 35 - "More Than Meets The Eye..."" from James
Review:
Okay, you have just joined the elite team of authors that cannot die until your story is finished.
Really liking this story. Would like to see more soon.
Thank you for not making Draco an obvious outcast by having his father be a true Death Eater.
James
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
The next chapter is started, I just have to gt my muse to finish it. ;-(
Review By [James] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""You Know, You're Really Beginning To Piss me Off-" from James
Review:
Ok, didn't see that one coming. Dumbeldore as the dark lord. I like the way you think. Now just to deal with Moldyshorts.
James
Comments from author:
Glad I could surprise you. ;-)
And the problem with Tommy will be addressed in the next few chapters.
Review By [James] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "“– and prepare to be surprised.”" from James
Review:
I love Draco-is-not-a-total-git stories!
Oh, I would not want to be in Dumbeldore's robes right now.
James
Comments from author:
Yeah, Draco has to be salvaged early if you want him to not be a complete git.
Glad you're enjoying this story. ;-)
Review By [James] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 26 – “Things are getting interesting.”" from James
Review:
A. D. as a self-deluded chess master of people and events, with one and a half brain cells tied beneath his bum seems quite appropriate.
Fred and George do not know the hornet's nest they have kicked.
James
Comments from author:
Dumbledore is definitely arrogant and overly self-confident when evaluating his potential foes, but I don't think he's even been able to conceive of any student - let alone a First Year - actively looking to oppose him. Of course, he's never met anyone like Harry before this, either. ;-)
And the Twins are going to be learning just how big a mistake they made, in the not too distant future. ;-)
Review By [James] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18 – Catch Me If You Can" from James
Review:
"middle-aged woman and her robot dog "
Sarah Jane and K-9
Comments from author:
Yepper. Glad you noticed that little Easter egg. ;-)
Review By [James] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11 – Introductions and Predilections" from James
Review:
Boy, is the Potter gang going to be in for a surprise...
James
Comments from author:
Yeah, it's a bit of a surprise, but not really that earthshaking after having to deal with the kind of demons and what-not the Council has been handling for the past few centuries. ;-)
Review By [James] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from James
Review:
Nice shovel speech, for his age.
Jon Carter, any relation to mini-me version of Jack? Are Jack and Sam married in this universe?
James
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.
Harry paid a lot of attention to how his family handles various situations, and both Buffy and Xander were quite disappointed that they weren't present to see Harry greeting Jon. ;-)
Yes, Jon is mini-Jack, as you've probably already discovered, and no, Jack and Sam aren't married to each other in this 'verse.
Review By [James] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 8 Life Lessons - Growing up Scooby, Part 4" from James
Review:
So, Willow and Faith. Didn't see that one coming.
Comments from author:
Good to hear. ;-)
I try to make things different, in order to keep the storylines fresh and not seeming as though they're all cookie-cutter identical.
Review By [James] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just found this and read it in one sitting. Wow, hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The next chapter is being worked on right now, as time and my muse's whims allow.
Review By [scottyboy] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Truths and Consequences" from James
Review:
Interesting that Giles thinks of him as a grandchild. Makes me wonder if Lilly put a little something extra in the spell to compel the individuals around the protector to feel protective of Harry, too?
James
Comments from author:
No, it's simply that the Scoobies realized that they are truly a family, and Giles' comment would be the same, regardless of whether that grandchild is natural-born or adopted.
Review By [James] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [James] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35 - "More Than Meets The Eye..."" from Netchka
Review:
Still a very cool story. Can't wait for the next chapters to arrive. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've got the next chapter started, and I'm just waiting n my muse to tell me exactly what happens next, and in what sequence.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35 - "More Than Meets The Eye..."" from Starfox
Review:
Great story. Alas, I would have liked for Dumbledore to die less quickly, and more painfully. Very nice twist with Lucius in chapter 35, I didn't see that coming. Also a good and logical way to make Draco less of a twit.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. Working on the next chapter as my muse dictates, and her attention has been distracted with several other things lately.
And I'm glad you realized *why* Draco isn't a smacked-ass, like he was in canon. ;-)
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35 - "More Than Meets The Eye..."" from loretta
Review:
this is a great story! i cant wait to see what will happen next, i hope you update soon
Comments from author:
I'm working on the next chapter as time and Real Life (tm) allow, so It shouldn't be too long before it's done.
Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story. ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35 - "More Than Meets The Eye..."" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Have the next chapter started, but work and Real Life (tm) aren't being all that cooperative. ;-(
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
James
