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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Just found this.

Please update!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I like where this is heading, I think. Of course, it could be a trap.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Hi! I read this on Xanderzone and I really hope seeing this here means your working on this because I think it's a great story.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Downery
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He's not a little kid anymore and he's seen the movies and played the games. Don't know why he's acting like a virgin with no life experience. One thing to peek but when a woman doesn't care if you look, you look.
Review By [Downery] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Fayari
Review:
Are you a practitioner of Aikido? I'm sorry for this if you are, but I gotta be honest, I don't think an Aikido master like the way you described would ever hurt his beginner-level dummy the way you described Xander being hurt during training. And Randori, multiple opponent fighting/sparring, would involve simply redirecting away any aggressors that block your path as you head away from the mob of enemies. No sane Aikido practitioner would ever engage a pack of enemies for more than three seconds, not even to save a victim. Hardly enough time to dust two vamps, let alone a pack. S/he would, instead, lure the pack away from the victim, running all the while her/himself.

I'm not saying this to be an asshole or anything. Those parts just bugged me a bit, since that's the way I was taught to use my own Aikido training, and I've been a practitioner for around ten years now, and a black belt for four.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Orchamus
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Quite the remarkable story you have here, I must say I enjoy the pace you have set so far. Please keep up the good work.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Elleria
Review:
Love this! Very happy to see an update.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from MBB
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I like your story so far.

About the direction you are going, you seem to be nuanced enough about the group, so I have realistic hope that is fighting stays realistic (even with traning less then Buffy who has training+speed+experience)

About why he never had training on the show, (aside from making him no longer the normal guy), there was not much time: 8 hours work+8hours sleep+3 hours patrol+2 hours date with Anya+2 hours movies to quip from+1hour dinner already makes 24 hours.
Becoming a top athlete takes multiple hours training every day.
Review By [MBB] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from purrfus
Review:
Delicious. Except for the beans on toast. And I can say that with a straight face having grown up on SOS.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Eureka
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WOW to think that you can get to where you can't get up that your muscles would freeze up like that after a fight is well it's actually kind of funny.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BurningLight
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Why do I think she is going to show him the movie version of Buffy?
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crypt Raider" from dominic
Review:
are you going to continue this story further than the chapters on xanderzone
Comments from author:
It will pass them yes. I'm also doing some re-writing of the chapters as I go.
Review By [dominic] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from trongod
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Let's see... Aikido from a highly skilled master of the Art... Check

Picking Bryce's brains for ideas and toys for surveillance... Check, even if he hasn't realized it yet...

Lara about to whip up some high test firepower for Xander Training Session 2: Things To Go Boom!.. Looks like we're closing in on it. Seriously, with all the weaponry she has available, I'm betting she's either discovered, commissioned, or has been trained on things to kill the Night Bumpers already, since you've already she she's encountered vampires, plus that temple guardian she and Xander ran into during their initial introduction...

I'm thinking that being able to reach out and touch something from 500+ meters is better than going toe to toe with a Big Bad if you absolutely don't have to.
Review By [trongod] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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