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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragan
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I guess he really is a brutal sensei. :)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JinaSolo
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More please!

This is a very interesting story and I would really like to read more!
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SpacedCadet
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Just found this.

Please update!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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I like where this is heading, I think. Of course, it could be a trap.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Studyofchaos
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Hi! I read this on Xanderzone and I really hope seeing this here means your working on this because I think it's a great story.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Downery
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He's not a little kid anymore and he's seen the movies and played the games. Don't know why he's acting like a virgin with no life experience. One thing to peek but when a woman doesn't care if you look, you look.
Review By [Downery] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Fayari
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Are you a practitioner of Aikido? I'm sorry for this if you are, but I gotta be honest, I don't think an Aikido master like the way you described would ever hurt his beginner-level dummy the way you described Xander being hurt during training. And Randori, multiple opponent fighting/sparring, would involve simply redirecting away any aggressors that block your path as you head away from the mob of enemies. No sane Aikido practitioner would ever engage a pack of enemies for more than three seconds, not even to save a victim. Hardly enough time to dust two vamps, let alone a pack. S/he would, instead, lure the pack away from the victim, running all the while her/himself.

I'm not saying this to be an asshole or anything. Those parts just bugged me a bit, since that's the way I was taught to use my own Aikido training, and I've been a practitioner for around ten years now, and a black belt for four.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
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Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Orchamus
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Quite the remarkable story you have here, I must say I enjoy the pace you have set so far. Please keep up the good work.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Elleria
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Love this! Very happy to see an update.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from MBB
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I like your story so far.

About the direction you are going, you seem to be nuanced enough about the group, so I have realistic hope that is fighting stays realistic (even with traning less then Buffy who has training+speed+experience)

About why he never had training on the show, (aside from making him no longer the normal guy), there was not much time: 8 hours work+8hours sleep+3 hours patrol+2 hours date with Anya+2 hours movies to quip from+1hour dinner already makes 24 hours.
Becoming a top athlete takes multiple hours training every day.
Review By [MBB] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from purrfus
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Delicious. Except for the beans on toast. And I can say that with a straight face having grown up on SOS.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Eureka
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WOW to think that you can get to where you can't get up that your muscles would freeze up like that after a fight is well it's actually kind of funny.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BurningLight
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Why do I think she is going to show him the movie version of Buffy?
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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