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Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from maxthehobbit
The Shield, one of my favorite series, especially the first two seasons. This would have been better if it was longer and Vic got into the action more, but it was still good.
Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
The Shield, borrowed season one went out and bought season to before I'd finished watching. Great up to season 4 then it went off, too much politics.

Always meant to do another The Shield xover for just the reasons you've mentioned, needs to be longer and needs more Vic! Unfortunately I've not got round to it yet.

Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from litmouse
Another good read. I particularly admire your ability to integrate modern weapons into the setting without losing the "swords are fun" aspect.
The Shield is another show I've only seen one or two eps, but had no trouble following. Good job not explaining what didn't need to be explained.
On to Colorado
Comments from author:
The Shield; one of my Fave shows at the moment.
I re-read this myself a few weeks ago and thought I could have do with a little bit more description in parts, but it still hangs together even so.

Glad you're still enjoying these. Colorado! I was aiming at a 'different' Stargate tale what do you think?

All the best,
Review By [litmouse] • Date [25 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from biggstu
Nice story thanks
Review By [biggstu] • Date [28 Apr 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Erica
I am a tad confused. Wasn't this story adn 'A Postcard From Hell' already completed on this site? Why are you re-posting them, they seem to be exactly the same as before?
Comments from author:
Hi there Erica,
I'm reformatting my stories to make them easier to read (or so I'm told). I'm also taking the opertunity to rewrite little bits in both stories. Some times it's just something like word order, or restructuring a paragraph. There were bits in both stories I was never too happy about. Sometimes I've added little bits of information about what happened prior to 'Postcard'.
The plots haven't changed in anyway. so don't fret!

Its also a cynicle ploy to get people to read them who might have missed them the first time!

Have a nice Spring/Easter break. I'm on leave in another 4 hours so YIPPEEEEE!

All the best,
Review By [Erica] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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