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Review of chapter "Unravelling" from SeekerSidhe
Review:
Great story. Please finish it.
Review By [SeekerSidhe] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unravelling" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
This one's pretty interesting, I can't wait to see how it progresses.I really liie that Angel is still around, it's good that Dawn isn't completely alone. I'm actually kinda hoping that maybe Spike is still around as well. Please update again soon! I can't wait for more!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [12 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unravelling" from Keshkreature
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Wow, so Angel gets to play too? Spiffy =) And now we have beasties for River to fight. I liked your whole portrayal of the man from the mines. It was very well written and fleshed out. I'm deffinately looking forward to more.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [21 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unravelling" from marietsy
Review:
Lovely, just lovely.

I can't wait for more!
Review By [marietsy] • Date [16 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unravelling" from WhiteWolf
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I don't think Angel would call Dawn Kiddo, that was Faith trade mark.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [16 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playthings" from tals
Review:
This story is absolutely wonderful. The language is almost poetic in its descriptions, and there is this lump in the back of my throat that wouldn't go away all through the story. Poor, poor Dawn (I assume). The writing really is beautiful, the picures you conjure up are just awe-inspiring. Like Inara's hands fluttering like two birds that had forgotten how to fly (or something to that effect). You have this beautiful, descriptive language everywhere and it really makes your story stand out. The plot itself works well, and I like how you take your time exploring the different characters. I loved River, and how she saw herself in the dinosaurs (that they only eat, sleep and fight, and that pretending anything else is just fooling them) I loved how you managed to get us into her mind, and gave us her fragmented memory, the weird things she says and so on, but also managed to convey that she really does have an understanding of somekind of what has happened to her. That she reflects, but is simply unable to talk about it in a meaningful way. It's quite impressive that you manage to have her dialogue be just as confused and weird as in the show, yet give us the sense that underneath there is a logic to everything she says.

Okay, I'll stop now, I could probably continue praising other aspects of the story; the flow of it, the dialogue, the relationships between the characters, all the things you manage to convey in only a few words, but I'd probably end up wit cramps in my hands, and you'd be all embarrased. Thanks for sharing this story. It's beautiful.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [5 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playthings" from Keshkreature
Review:
Poor River, and the rest of the crew. I hope the "not alone promise" will hold true for River soon. Sounds like she could really use it, although whether it would help her or the others more, I'm not sure.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [4 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confession" from Fooo
Review:
This is... intriguing.

Thanks.
Review By [Fooo] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from Keshkreature
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Wow, that was great. I almost cried for Inara. Deffinately looking forward to the next part. Is this story going to go through the movie, or is it all pre-Serenity?
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [22 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up" from Keshkreature
Review:
Very interesting premise. I'd love to see Dawn come and meet River, and the crew's reaction to her. Please write more. Oh, and don't forget to add a disclaimer at the beginning.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up" from Iceflame
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Neat! A VERY nice twist on a Buffy Immortal!!! And it WOULD be like Buffy to try and make certain no one Girl was ever all alone :-D. And who better than one who was once just a Slayer? All I ask is more updates, before I die of heart failure!!!!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [5 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking Up" from onlimain
Review:
This is an interesting start so far. So, in her dream, was River sitting next to SlayerBuffy, looking at GuardianBuffy? I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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