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Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Vickzie
Review:
Wicked story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting plot....
nice twists ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [20 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from efwrocks
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I loved that you turned Colonel MacNamara/O'Hare into a dog, and Kinsey (That was THE funniest thing!)
Review By [efwrocks] • Date [22 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from winnie
Review:
neat story.enjoyed the characters and the story line. looking forward to the sequel
Review By [winnie] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from NaiveGhost
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I really like this story. I have just re-read it and am looking forward to the sequel updates.
Keep writing!
;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Liked the story. Took me a minute to figure who the MASH descendants were - but I think these two are more savvy than their forebears. Nice work!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Waverly
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I loved this story. Great job!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
excellent story - i have read it several times and it is one of my favorites!
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Bluejello
Review:
*applause* Wonderful! Now, I'm off to the sequel!
Comments from author:
Read the sequel very, very slowly...
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Amai
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It was a very interesting story, and I thought you handled the characters well. The only thing that I had trouble with was the volume of rehashing that went on, some of extraneous to the movement of the plot and more a recertaition of accomplishments. But I loved the fact that you managed to incorporate ideas I haven't seen before, into a familiar concept. (Buffy/SG) And that you managed that many characters coherently. And I'm glad you have this listed as a serious.
Review By [Amai] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Just reread this story and i have to say I loved it more this time. Which is hard to say because I really, really liked it the first time i read it. I was able to catch all the little details this time around though and I have to say it did enrich the story.

I loved the way you aged mini-Jack! Very well done.

Sigh.

The only compliant I have is I wish it could have been longer.(grin) I hope you let us know more about JT and Buffy's time in Hell. Or not, I totally trust you!

Thank you for sharing your time and talent in writing it.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [11 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from GreenDragon
Review:
Excellent story, although there are still a few spots where corrections were made, but the original errors were left in, giving some redundant words and weirding out a couple of sentences.

Really like the whole concept, and I disagree with Wise... having JT and Buffy as a couple the way you did it by involving the "Anne" hell-dimension is (IMHO) a perfectly acceptable plot device. And you did explain some of that "missing" back-story by expositions from both Buffy and JT.

I especially liked the scene with Xander and Carter on the back porch/balcony... could be an opening for a possible Xander/Sam pairing. Granted, Sam *is* older, but then again, Xander has seen and done so much in his fight against the dark that he would be a good match for Sam.

Now off to read the sequel... and any more of your fics I haven't read yet. I *really* like your work!
Review By [GreenDragon] • Date [27 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from rivrgrl
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loved it. a very unique pairing. i like the plot and how it's paced and also how well it fits into both story lines.. really liked the JT's line about helping Willow destroy the base if anything happened to Buffy or the Baby.. what better way to say you love someone then by causing mass destruction of a military base??

the two M*A*S*H relatives are Zale and Burns.. took some time to figure out but i did.
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from Ansku
Review:
Good one :D I love your explanation of Faith's lastnamelessness, I can't believe this is the very first fic that I remember reading with that particular reason... and I read quite a lot.
A bit abrupt at times, but very entertaining :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [9 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from kimbclar
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I was suprised to find this in the underreviewed category. I think it's one of the best Stargate Crosses out there. I love Buffy with JT. I'm also enjoying the sequal. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [kimbclar] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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