Nice part!!!! So, who stepped out after Cordy? i'm thinking Draco... and I hope he's getting somehow human, and only following her because he starts to like her... or it may be Ron, but that wouldn't be so good. Hey, you should have Luna speak some little Chinese as well! and use some swearing slang from Firefly. Like "Gorram" or talking about "sexin'"
I love it. The idea of a cheerleading team at Hogwarts makes me grin every time I picture it. Bitchy,bossy Californian teen VS British (Oh so!) students of Hogwarts.Very entertaining. Xander is pretty cool too. Good mix of humor and angst. Keep going!
Well, I personally think that it's cool that cordy got her visions already. As long as you give a good explanation to it, I certainly don't have a problem with it. I expected some Snapebashing by Cordy, but i guess I was wrong. Wait, no, I wasn't! If she didn't have the vision, she would have chewed him out!
The hardest part of the AU to believe was in the set up -- the school that Xander and Cordelia went to and why -- but after that a lot of the characterization is cannon-esque. The story is enjoyable so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Not Rated
