"Damned lesbian triplet dreams." Hee.
An interesting second chapter to the series, full of angst and PTSD and ominous foreshadowings and nifty easter eggs and references to other stories and realities. Alas, it seems to have stalled out.
Thanks for writing, and I hope things are going well for you. And allow more time for future writing, of course. :)

really leave the planet for demons...yah noooooo... you see lets just blow up the son and say bye bye birdies...very weak story with no logic

Great story so far, but it is not finished! I see that you are spending some time on Dawn as well as Illyria in this one. I am sure that whatever explanation you come up with for Dawn will be just as awesome as the blending of Illyria and Fred in the previous story. I wonder if Dawn will have any idea what is going on before she switches back home again?
Or maybe she is doomed to dream of fanfic and roam the dimensions forever, never to return home.

Hmm. Seems unlikely at this point, but if you ever have time/inspiration to continue this, I'd read it. Even though I've never seen Atlantis at all.

Are you ever planning on continuing this? It is quite good, and I'd like to read more - I particularly like the crossover with you other story "Quickened". I did note, however, that you never posted the last chapter to ff.n, and that the numbner of survivors of Earth-That-Was is different - ten million on one site, twenty million on the other.

On the subject of stories of yours that I'd love to see more of, were you ever planning on writing more of "Far From Home" (also not yet posted to ff.n)?

Absolutely superb. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.

I hope you have not abandoned this story. It is one of the best post-apocalypse stories I have ever read.

Very intrigued, I hope you continue this story

This is a very, very interesting read - not to surprisingly I find myself preferring the world that Atlantis Dawn has been transferred to (or at least I prefer it so far) I was not expecting the end of Epigoni to be quite so... apocalyptical.

Looking forward to your next update!

Great chapter! The part where Dawn "woke up" from sex with the Cuckoos had me confused as hell. lol. I actually checked to make sure I hadn't somehow clicked on a link to one of Joe's stories. I can't wait for another chapter. :)

Well, I'm confused and entertained so that's always a good sign. I'm very interested in finding out what's happening to Dawn. I cannot wait for the next chapter. :D

::Feeds the plot bunny::

I hope you will get inspired to continue this story soon.

::Looks cautiously at the nefarious cliffhanger::

heh

love the way the stories going the way you are developing Illyria's character. the way your working everything in very interesting.

*snort* Dawn dreaming of an orgy with the Stepford Cuckoos? Her picturing Teyla naked?

Did you and Joe merge minds or something? ;-)

Anyway, interesting chapter. Want more...

Hahahaha
Interesting question.

OMG! You updated. Thank you soooo much. this is one of my favorite stories. I just love it when ppl put Illyrian and Dawn together. Can't wait for the next chapters.