Review of chapter "Discoveries" from lunalurker
"Damned lesbian triplet dreams." Hee.
An interesting second chapter to the series, full of angst and PTSD and ominous foreshadowings and nifty easter eggs and references to other stories and realities. Alas, it seems to have stalled out.
Thanks for writing, and I hope things are going well for you. And allow more time for future writing, of course. :)
Review By [lunalurker
] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Small Step" from mojtaba
really leave the planet for demons...yah noooooo... you see lets just blow up the son and say bye bye birdies...very weak story with no logic
Review By [mojtaba
] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Gideon
Great story so far, but it is not finished! I see that you are spending some time on Dawn as well as Illyria in this one. I am sure that whatever explanation you come up with for Dawn will be just as awesome as the blending of Illyria and Fred in the previous story. I wonder if Dawn will have any idea what is going on before she switches back home again?
Or maybe she is doomed to dream of fanfic and roam the dimensions forever, never to return home.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Small Step" from bookworm
Hmm. Seems unlikely at this point, but if you ever have time/inspiration to continue this, I'd read it. Even though I've never seen Atlantis at all.
Review By [bookworm
] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from apollo
Are you ever planning on continuing this? It is quite good, and I'd like to read more - I particularly like the crossover with you other story "Quickened". I did note, however, that you never posted the last chapter to ff.n, and that the numbner of survivors of Earth-That-Was is different - ten million on one site, twenty million on the other.
On the subject of stories of yours that I'd love to see more of, were you ever planning on writing more of "Far From Home" (also not yet posted to ff.n)?
Review By [apollo
] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from leelaa
Absolutely superb. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Squeallikeapig
I hope you have not abandoned this story. It is one of the best post-apocalypse stories I have ever read.
Review By [Squeallikeapig
] • Date [26 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from sopchoppy
Very intrigued, I hope you continue this story
Review By [sopchoppy
] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Crydwyn
This is a very, very interesting read - not to surprisingly I find myself preferring the world that Atlantis Dawn has been transferred to (or at least I prefer it so far) I was not expecting the end of Epigoni to be quite so... apocalyptical.
Looking forward to your next update!
Review By [Crydwyn
] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Saturn
Great chapter! The part where Dawn "woke up" from sex with the Cuckoos had me confused as hell. lol. I actually checked to make sure I hadn't somehow clicked on a link to one of Joe's stories. I can't wait for another chapter. :)
Review By [Saturn
] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from ContessaD
Well, I'm confused and entertained so that's always a good sign. I'm very interested in finding out what's happening to Dawn. I cannot wait for the next chapter. :D
Review By [ContessaD
] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Dragonelf
::Feeds the plot bunny::
I hope you will get inspired to continue this story soon.
::Looks cautiously at the nefarious cliffhanger::
Comments from author:
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Small Step" from Jackkongmaxwell
love the way the stories going the way you are developing Illyria's character. the way your working everything in very interesting.
Review By [Jackkongmaxwell
] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Small Step" from ObsidianBlack
*snort* Dawn dreaming of an orgy with the Stepford Cuckoos? Her picturing Teyla naked?
Did you and Joe merge minds or something? ;-)
Anyway, interesting chapter. Want more...
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Review By [ObsidianBlack
] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discoveries" from Drix
OMG! You updated. Thank you soooo much. this is one of my favorite stories. I just love it when ppl put Illyrian and Dawn together. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Review By [Drix
] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated