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Review of chapter "last part" from Rune
Review:
The dumb as dirt vamps Buffy mainly faced in the show were easy to fight and win against.

Xander here is shown as a smart vampire. That's why he won.

And a new slayer will be called when Buffy is turned.

Will Xander turn Joyce and Dawn?

I'm giving you a nine because I prefer the good guys to win.
If I was into dark fics then I'd give a ten.

Thanks for writing.
Review By [Rune] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from Fayari
Review:
Woah!
Review By [Fayari] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "last part" from Vassago
Review:
The only reason I'm not giving this a 10 is because of the numerous grammatical errors in it. Most of them are small, and wouldn't really be noticeable by themselves, but they pile up. Missing letters are the most common, sometimes the wrong tense was used, and/or the wrong, sometimes an extra, punctuation mark.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from lorwen
Review:
This story is an easy 10.
Should really be something higher to class it as.
Most people that make Xander evil don't do it well.
Your Xander is creepy as hell, and more twisted than Angelus.
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good job...!
Comments from author:
I just took the basic from every Vampire movie. put them in Xan. then though in some smarts and great bad guy. Most of the bad guys in Buffy were the Me Smash type. and the smart ones had control issues.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from jaguaratricks
Review:
that was a great story. the last part was fing awsome i could see both outside buffy's window tempting her. thart was creepy and awsome.
Review By [jaguaratricks] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "last part" from Bobboky
Review:
harsh story, well written
Comments from author:
thanks like to get the dark side out every now and then
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "last part" from DanaShort
Review:
How did I miss this back in March? It's really well done. Ends perfectly!
Comments from author:
Thanks I really like to let the evil side out sometimes.
Review By [DanaShort] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from BenTulsa
Review:
WOW that was sick dark and so damn good. thanks for putting this up and your other stories. hope to see more of your work soon.
Review By [BenTulsa] • Date [30 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from Sandi
Review:
Very, very cool. Scary and on point. I've always wondered why the bad guys come straight at them. Xander's methods were much smarter and more effective.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from LFW
Review:
Wow
What kind of vampire are they?
Dark and surprising with the murder of Oz and the legal doping of Buffy
Did I not understand, or is Xander protecting the Hellmouth
but not the people of Sunnydale?
I might be seeing more in than you intend but it is a real good read
Thanks

ps more Cowboy XT please
Review By [LFW] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "last part" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Nice dark tale.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 4" from wraiths
Review:
THANK YOU, THANK YOU for adding more to this story. Vamp Xander is believable and I love that you have not made him mindless like some other stories. When will you tell who turned Xander.

Good luck and good health.
Comments from author:
Well, Xander was not turned by the same kind of Vampire and the others in Sunnydale. I am kind of making them up taking a little bit of the this and that from other books movies stories.
Review By [wraiths] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 4" from Sadfru
Review:
Very nice rendition (Dictionaries and Thesurases rock) of Vamp Xand, believably evil, cunning, and damn scary, will buffy end up back in the pysch ward? :)
Comments from author:
thank you, I always think evil is better when their not just (ME KILL) type of bad guys. And he is trying to punish Buffy.

As to the Pysch ward, what would any mother do that finds out about her Daughter, thinks that they are vampires and demons out there and that goes out every night to hunt them, with a some College guy, that she slept with? Not to forget if Buffy has anything else in her trunk, Spells books, Spell componets ect.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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