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Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wild Fox" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A DATE PART 2" from zagan
Review:
Very funny ! I can't wait for more.
Review By [zagan] • Date [14 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A DATE PART 2" from Katilwen
Review:
I love Petshop of Horrors (I actually just bought the second one today), and was so thrilled to see a crossover for it! Love the story so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [Katilwen] • Date [22 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A DATE PART 2" from Sadfru
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Xander dating, the joke that keeps on giving :)

Till next time
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A DATE" from Deadpan
Review:
One suggestion on your writing: Past tense works better than present tense. For example:

Suddenly, as Tsukiko drops her extended tail hits the handle of the pan and the stir fry goes flying. It hit's something unseen and a half-animal half-human scream is heard.

Would work better as

Suddenly, as Tsukiko dropped her extended tail, it hit the handle of the pan and the stir fry went flying. It hit something unseen and a half-animal half-human scream was heard.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A DATE" from CPTSkip
Review:
I don't know that much about anime but I like your story. It is a slightly off beat Xander but I like him and I really like your Slayers and the kitsume. I look forward to seeing What Happens Next.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "DOGFIGHT" from Deadpan
Review:
I agree with hillarydoc, your ideas for this story are very good, but you really need more proofreading.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [12 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE RULES" from Telmah
Review:
Looks like Xander will need to develop a taste for Tofu! I just read the wikipedia entry on Kitsune. Apparently they have a strong love of fried strips of tofu. Maybe he can introduce her to twinkies and they can share each-other's culinary loves! :)
Fun story so far. Happy writing!
-Telmah
Review By [Telmah] • Date [11 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE RULES" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
Great story idea, but your English is a little awkward in places and there were a few typos. You'd benefit from a beta reader. Please consider it because this promises to be a very entertaining story. I love the idea of demon-magnet Xander in love with a mischievous fox/trickster/demon that means him no harm at all, but can't help but cause chaos and confusion wherever she goes.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [11 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE RULES" from Telmah
Review:
Neat! Xander, while very skilled and experienced, is still human and while he was a match for 1-3 vamps (with a little holy water), 5 was just too much. Very realistic. I also like how Xander introduced his new girl to his world not 10 steps from the "pet" shop. Very Xander. I also like that, yet again, a strong woman saved his bacon when his "White Knight" complex got him in trouble. Also Very Xander. I know next to nothing about "Kitsune" -I assume it is an Anime thing. Any chance that you can throw a little back story in there to educate us newbies to that genre?
Thanks for sharing your time and talent with us!
-Telmah
Review By [Telmah] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Youkai Experience" from Nuklear
Review:
hehe, this was good... looking forward to more so please hurry with the next part
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Youkai Experience" from Sky
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Great update!! ^_^
Looks like the fox woman likes Xander if her tail is curled around him..
Review By [Sky] • Date [9 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Welcome to Chinatown" from Nuklear
Review:
Okay I like this and Hope there is more to this story and that you will hurry with the next part...

Quick bit of trivia concerning Kitsune:

stories of Kitsune(called fox-wives) falling in love marrying humans and having childern with them are quite common in japanese folklore. In fact the name Kitsune comes from the oldest know story about the Fox-wives. After she's outed as being a fox her husband prevails upon her, saying, "Now that we have spent so many years together, and I have had several children by you, I cannot simply forget you. Please come and sleep with me." The fox agrees, and from then on returns to her husband each night in the shape of a woman, leaving again each morning in the shape of a fox. Therefore, she comes to be called Kitsune — because, in the classical Japanese, "kitsu-ne" means "come and sleep," while "ki-tsune" means "always comes."
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [9 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One Welcome to Chinatown" from SamDragon
Review:
Oh my.Please have more of the story to tell.The girls will flip when they see his new pet.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [8 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One Welcome to Chinatown" from Merna
Review:
A Petshop of Horrors/Buffy crossover with Xander and kitsune.
Oh yeah!
Review By [Merna] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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