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Review of chapter "New friends" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, if only the author had been able to carry on w/this story!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New friends" from bradsan
Review:
Darn you stopped when it gets interesting. again darn
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New friends" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New friends" from spring
Review:
I love this fic please update.
Review By [spring] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New friends" from spring
Review:
Don't leave me hanging hear please please update this fic!
Review By [spring] • Date [31 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New friends" from AngellovesBuffy
Review:
So far this story is going good please continue with this fic soon I really hope that Buffy and the Charmed ones are able to become very good friends and that the charmed ones can help Buffy with her problem concerning Angel's soul. I never did agree with that curse!
Review By [AngellovesBuffy] • Date [30 Aug 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New friends" from jammiesMM
Review:
This could be interesting please continue. I hope Paige will be in the story she is my fav Charmed girl. Not a big B/A shipper but if it is written well the I will read and this story looks good so I look forward to updates. I can't believe they asked her to leave then again I can believe that the "Scoobies" did ask her to leave. They expected Buffy to be so perfect and when she wasn't they didn't know how to handle it and did anything to try and keep Buffy in line like she was sommiting a crime for making a mistake. If I was her I wouldn't return to Sunnydale. Again great start and thank for posting
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, hold on, this story is just starting.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [8 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from spk
Review:
Definitely an interesting start. Can't wait to see what you do with it. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
You need to add a disclaimer, per rule 9. That isn't a suggestion, do so.

You need to run this through a spell checker - there were too many words misspelled or used wrong. The tenses kept switching back and forth.
Just read this sentence out loud and see how many mistakes you can find:
a spell had been casted for Angelus return,a very effective one because Angelus did return in full force.

There needs to be a space after a comma (,) when in the middle of a sentence, and every sentence needs to begin with a capital letter. After every sentence you need to have at least one space to separate sentences...this is the norm for correct grammar and punctuation.

Sunnydale is a city and therefore needs to be capitalized.

thing's should be things - no need for an apostrophe here

Again, spell check, please...

Demona
Comments from author:
Sorry, I will try to do better next chapter. tanks for the rewiew.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from texaswookie
Review:
good start you need to go over your spelling though you got words in the wrong spot or mispelled
Comments from author:
It´s my first fanfiction and my english isn't to good. Sorry any way thanks for the review.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [3 out of 10]
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