I really like this fic. Normally I'm not a fan of this crossing but you pulled it off. It's a shame that this is a dead fic. Here's hoping you can come back to it soon.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Love the story. I don't know if you stopped writing due to writers block or just lost interest. In any case I thought I would pitch some ideas on love interests and friendships that will add to the stories overall fun.
* Hinata has a crush on Xander since he saved her ( Xander either doesn't know or is just amused by it) -- mini-Willow or Dawn * Kurenai - is known as the ice queen much like Cordelia was in high school....possible love interest * Anko --- is like a mature and smarter Faith...possible love interes or close friend * Buffy = Sakura....fangirl....gets uber strong due to training from Tsunade but is an airhead * Tsunade -- Joyce\Anya hybrid......loves to gamble(Money like Anya)....acts like a mother to Naruto (Joyce).....either she may have a crush on Xander due to his attitude reminding her of her lover Dan or she got sloppy drunk with Xander and they ended up having a night of passion...
Anywho these are just random thoughts that I thought you could use for your story.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
i recommend either Anko,Kurenai, or Shizune as a possible pairing for Xander, or you can make him somethin like a person with a good amount of female friends like he does in the cannon buffy only he will have benefits in your story. though im leanin towards Anko seeing as Xander has a thing for strong women who are emotionally unstable in some way. until next time
zima
