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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from brokenangel
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Why has this awesome story not been updated?!?!?!?!?!?! Are you dead?
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Past Donor)zima
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To bad that you stopped writing this story because it is really fun to read.
Review By [(Past Donor)zima] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from nonrev
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cool more plz
Review By [nonrev] • Date [5 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from LadyFoxFire
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I really like this fic. Normally I'm not a fan of this crossing but you pulled it off. It's a shame that this is a dead fic. Here's hoping you can come back to it soon.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [3 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from brokenangel
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This is a follow up review and a what's up.

Love the story. I don't know if you stopped writing due to writers block or just lost interest. In any case I thought I would pitch some ideas on love interests and friendships that will add to the stories overall fun.

* Hinata has a crush on Xander since he saved her ( Xander either doesn't know or is just amused by it) -- mini-Willow or Dawn
* Kurenai - is known as the ice queen much like Cordelia was in high school....possible love interest
* Anko --- is like a mature and smarter Faith...possible love interes or close friend
* Buffy = Sakura....fangirl....gets uber strong due to training from Tsunade but is an airhead
* Tsunade -- Joyce\Anya hybrid......loves to gamble(Money like Anya)....acts like a mother to Naruto (Joyce).....either she may have a crush on Xander due to his attitude reminding her of her lover Dan or she got sloppy drunk with Xander and they ended up having a night of passion...

Anywho these are just random thoughts that I thought you could use for your story.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from WingZero
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more, more, more, more more!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeee im dying 2 know what happens!!
Review By [WingZero] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from IAMZIPPY
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update update please!!!
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TheDon
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i recommend either Anko,Kurenai, or Shizune as a possible pairing for Xander, or you can make him somethin like a person with a good amount of female friends like he does in the cannon buffy only he will have benefits in your story. though im leanin towards Anko seeing as Xander has a thing for strong women who are emotionally unstable in some way. until next time

-The Don
Review By [TheDon] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Jossalyn
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I love it so update soon
Review By [Jossalyn] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from megan
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I was wondering if you are going to finish this story?
Review By [megan] • Date [28 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RojoOjo
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This story is just wonderful! You really can tell you put thought into the story and it is a fun read.
Review By [RojoOjo] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from BlackPrinceThomas
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love this story realy well done but I have to say "Let the gods pity anyone who tries to hurt naruto because xander won't."
Review By [BlackPrinceThomas] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Elleria
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Love this. More as soon as you can please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from musiclover
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interesting
Review By [musiclover] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from silvergaurd
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awesome new chapter! Hope to see more soon!
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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