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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from breve
Review:
witches of the non-gay variety lol
off to see if you've written any more stories with willow/illyria in this world
Review By [breve] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from obscure
Review:
A nice one shot, would be nice if you extended it into a full length fic, however it works rather well as it is never the less, nice to see a good Willow centred fic.
Review By [obscure] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I enjoyed the story. I liked the interaction with Illyria and Willow a lot, and the shock from the others seemed pretty much what one might expect.

Although I'm not lesbian, I would have enjoyed it a lot more if it hadn't had the bitter comments from her co-worker about her being a lesbian... Would he have made similar comments if she had been in a relationship with a guy?

Then there was the "Just the good looking ones like Willow, except of the non-gay variety." That just seemed gratuitous.

It was also out of character. Though he would definitely say something that inappropriate, I really can't imagine Jack saying anything that *bigoted*.

Thought: If you can't deal with Willow being lesbian, maybe you shouldn't write about her, or you should write stories where she's not lesbian. After all people write slash stories about straight characters all the time... why not the other way around? The snarky remarks about lesbians just lower the value of your story, even though the story itself is otherwise quite entertaining.

Blue
Comments from author:
Interesting comments thank you. My favourite couple in Buffy were Willow and Tara. Please don't make the mistake of attributing the comments made by a character in a story with the views of the author. My intention was for a couple of men to express disappointment that somebody as beautiful as Willow was not available to them. That and an attempt at humor. I appreciate that you don't think I pulled it off very well.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cacklesmadly
Review:
Interesting premise, though it needs a little work to flow a bit better. Good story.
Review By [cacklesmadly] • Date [24 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Over way too soon, at least the Willow Illyria part.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome, i love this and hope for more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
Oh boy. I loved the confrontation between Illyria and Willow and how after they made up they left arm-in-arm to talk about Tara. I also love Jack's request to only recruit the pretty witches. About that, if Willow's magic is causing problems with the Stargate, would adding more witches to the mix just make matters worse? Please write more soon. I can't wait to see how this story develops.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your kind words. I don't have any more of this one I'm afraid but I will be posting on this site the much longer Buffy/Angel/Charmed/Stargate story that I am working on at the moment.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [11 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azulkan
Review:
Interesting story. Looking forward to where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. At the moment this goes no further I'm afraid.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Erica
Review:
I thought this was really interesting, but it ending felt like there was supposed to be another chapter or something to conclude the Fred/Illyria/Willow thing. It was very good though. Will there be a sequel?
Comments from author:
Thanks for your comments. At the moment there is no sequel. I don't rule one out eventually but at the moment I'm doing other things.
Review By [Erica] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistofRainbows
Review:
I like the story it's a nice amount of stargate and Buffy universe mixed together without a number of the pit falls I've seen to many times in Buffy/stargate crossovers. In other words keeping going on the story please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for that. This is a stand alone I'm afraid. I may return to it one day but at the moment I'm involved in other things.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This was kinda cute. Does this mean that naqueda can make a magic battery?
Comments from author:
Thanks for your comments. Maybe it does.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)DonSample
Review:
Not bad, but this would be a better story if you eliminated the "Introduction." Much of it is not really relevant to the story, most of the relevant parts are implicit in the story itself, and don't need to be stated. What's left should be added explicitly to the story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Good point.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! OK, this story is a bit wacky, but I liked it a lot. Nice job with the characters and dialog. I really hope you've written more to this story as I have a whole lot of questions and no answers. Well done and I will now go and look for more of your stories.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your kind words. At the moment I am afraid this is all there is to this story. I hope you like the other story that I have posted.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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