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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Mysteries abound" from manic
Review:
I like the story idea, but the fic is in dire need of spelling and grammer corrections. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yes I know thank you for your input and in the process of getting some beta readers to help.
Review By [manic] • Date [7 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Mysteries abound" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Discovery" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Discovery" from ChristaBelle
Review:
Looks like you still need some work on spelling and grammar, and you have an unterminated italic code, but it has definite possibilities. Good start. :)
Review By [ChristaBelle] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Discovery" from LenaMaria
Review:
Good start. Didn't expect Giles to be the host. But I'd like to point out there is no language called "Brazilian" - in Brazil, they speak Portuguese. Unless by "early Brazilian" you mean an indigenous language, like Riograndenser Hunsruckisch or Talian.
Comments from author:
Ok so i'm not a language expert but I'll get these fixed. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [LenaMaria] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Discovery" from manic
Review:
I'm looking forward to finding out who Mr. Red Eyes is, and how Giles became blended. But you still have a lot of editing to do.
Review By [manic] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from manic
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I didn't think it would be Giles. I look forward to more.
Review By [manic] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from morange
Review:
interesting... more please!
Review By [morange] • Date [23 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from (Current Donor)romero
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I enjoyed reading your story and am looking forward to reading what happens to Giles next.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting story concept. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
The large paragraph chunks could be split up to make it easier to swallow the material. It's very cumbersome at present. Also, you have some issues with homophones (wry and rye, for example) that need to be worked out.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The trip begins" from CPTSkip
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This is one kick-butt start! I totally didn't expect the Host to be Giles. You write very smooth prose and I liked your imagry. But you have to write more to explain what the heck is going on. Please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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