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Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from amokima
Review:
I liked this a lot.

Do you know if anyone has taken up your challenge to write a sequel?
Review By [amokima] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from gaulty
Review:
interesting ficlet, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from Genuka
Review:
Good fic. As to the end comment about readers writing sequels.... I'm taking that as an actually issued challenge even if I can't do it just now.*evil smirk*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [5 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from Alexandre
Review:
It's rather rushed, yes, but less so than I've seen others. I do like it as a prequel. As a matter of fact, I might very well write a sequel... Though probably only for my own entertainment. I was startlingly intrigued by the idea you mentioned of MiB. If I DO finish the sequel, I'll post it. Just uh... don't expect it any time soon, 'kay? ^^'
Review By [Alexandre] • Date [7 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from FireWolfe
Review:
Nice I love to see Xander make up with the scoobies but he deserved to get his ass kicked for the lie. If only because he was to cowardly to say the kick ass was from him and used willow.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from firedrakegirl
Review:
Interesting... I like it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from AXanFan
Review:
After reading some of the other reviews, I have to agree that this feels more like an introduction for a story. There wasn't enough there to say whether Xander was in character or not, but Willow certainly was not. She would never have been afraid that Xander was coming after them. Buffy might have said she would "kick his ass" if he came back because I get the feeling she would hold a grudge when it comes to messing with her Angel.

This is an interesting premise. I am sorry you chose not to fully explore it -- maybe someone else will pick-up where you left off.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from Vornae
Review:
well it was not a complete waste of my time to read this. You need to not rush the story so much, it felt more like an intro with the real story coming later. Willow and Buffy were no were in character and Xander kid of sucked as Xander.

Slow down
Add more depth to your story
Learn your charcters

Good luck on the next story
Review By [Vornae] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from OLazyOne
Review:
It wasn't horrible. There are a lot of stories worst than this one out there. That being said there are a lot of stories better too. The whole thing was incredibly rushed and characterization was completely sacrificed because of it.
Review By [OLazyOne] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from arkeus
Review:
LOL, kind of funny how you glorify Xander for the lie ^^......and manage to bash other people at the same time :p
Review By [arkeus] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from littleoldme
Review:
While this is technically well written, your Xander doesn't really sound like Xander, and your Buffy and Willow are about as out of character as they come. You've diverged so far from the canon that this might as well not be a crossover at all.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [28 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from Elleria
Review:
This is really good. Do you know if anyone took you up on the sequel bit? And if they did and you know, would you let me know?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from pnrocco
Review:
I enjoyed reading this.
Review By [pnrocco] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alexander Harris, Prisoner Number 9958745" from CPTSkip
Review:
While I liked your story as an outline, I wish you had filled it in better. It felt very rushed. That being said, I still liked it and the open ending you left for a sequel or sequels.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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