would be fun to see a sequel
fun story with good ending
thank you

Good story

First i just want to say great story! I have not laughed so hard in a while! I love the sense of humor!

really liked this story. too bad that there is not a sequel.
thank you for your efforts.

So awesome! I loved this! It was the best!

I have just reread this story and it was just as excellent as I remembered it.

I hope you get inspired to write a sequel to this story.


::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Cake::

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When you have a dream, you've got
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Continuity errors I noticed:

1. You start out with them researching in the library, but if it was post-graduation, then the library was already destroyed.

2. You keep referring to them as going to / living in England, but Hogwarts is in Scotland. The only time they went to England was to go shopping.

3. Why do people keep having trouble telling Xander & Harry apart when Harry wears glasses & Xander doesn't? I can understand the confusion when people approach from behind, but not from the front.

4. How come Angel & Spike didn't transform fully into uncontrollably demonic versions of themselves when they vamped out in Pylea?

5. 1st you said Hermione was taking over teaching transfiguration then you have Xander becoming McGonagall's teaching assistant in that subject as though she's still teaching those classes.

that was an amazing story.
i really enjoyed it and would love to read a sequel

BRAVO! Great story. Tho the M/M sex isn't to my liking (skipped those parts) but the rest was awesome.
Thanks.

this was a true delight to read. i started it and just couldn't stop. i am so glad i found it after it was all written though.. i am an impatient reader. thank you!

a long story, but cute.
going to look for more stories by the same author.

This is wonderful! I love everything about this fic. The only inconsistency I found was that in a few of the chapters you changed Xander's eye's back to brown from the green that you made them at the beginning of the fic when he got his elfin abilities. I really love the fact that Harry was able to help Joyce, I never liked the fact that she died. Again I love this wonderful fic and look forward to reading more such wonderful fic's by you.

i loved every second of this story and adored the end for Xander and his family. I always wish (oops... bad word)... i always wait for Xander to find hapiness and family in each fiction i read. I'm often disapointed, even if there are some cery good ones.

Yours is definitely with the best of them.

I came, i read, and i loved.

I just read this again and still love.it. Any thoughts on a sequel? There's still possibly closing the Sunnydale Hellmouth and some of what would have been Angel's adventures in LA. There's even the destruction of the Watcher's council (even if not by the First) and the activation of all the Slayers (again, unless the First comes because of someone else's resurrection, it would have to be in response to some other final battle (Wolfram & Hart?). I'd love to see Dawn at Hogwarts and maybe Willow (and Tara?) could audit some of their classes.

Nice story :)