Very good part 2!! Wonder how Bastila will respond to Buffy when she finds out about the wookie's life debt?!!

It's amazing how much dialogue I recognize from the game considering the last time I played it was years ago. Like what you've done with it so far so moving onwards! BTW why not post this as a series? Makes it easier for me(and other after) to link to the next installment.

Reading chapter 1 of Book 2 now. Good so far, but one goof...

Um, I know you wrote this back in '06, and folks might have already said this, but in-canon, Faith's actual name is Faith Lehane. Known only as "Faith" during the television series; she was not given a surname until 2005, seven years after her first appearance. Joss Whedon was approached by Eden Studios to create surnames for Faith and Kendra to use in a Buffy the Vampire Slayer role-playing game, and chose "Lehane" for Faith, because he wanted something "southie". It's her second Watcher, Wesley, who's last name is Pryce, Wesley Wyndam-Pryce (also spelled Wyndam-Price and Wyndham-Price.)

I have just reread book I and II and they where just as good as the last time I read them.


::Starts reading book III::

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To see a world in a grain of sand
and a heaven in a wild flower,
hold infinity in the palm of your hand
and eternity in an hour.
- William Blake
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Still very good, but I still don't see why you broke it up like this. Ah, well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Ah, os it was osani and not Vance who was suspicious. Silly me, me and oc names... The force bit was a bit expected, buit otherwise good. Bastilla is shown as most likely to get dark, but maybe you are preping for a twist there.

Good, but it still looks a bit too much like a game, and not enough like a real story or fanfiction. No matter. I also wonder why Buffy did not confront Vance, like he did her. Also, i hoe Buffy isn't going Dark- that would be a bit too "Done".

Good, but this looks way too much like a game, and not enough like astory.
I kind of prefer your newer story. Hence why you did it, maybe? you preferring the other one?

I am kind of confused at you calling common people "sith" as in my head, only jedi can be sith, but that's ok, maybe it's like this in the game too.
Nice work.

cool, why don't you have this set up as a series though?

good story

Hey M!

Whew! OK, breather. Trying to pace myself because this is such fun to read :D

Tomorrow I'll check out your next, but before I do, I just wanted to tell you how very much I admire they way you've put this story together.

Thanks for sharing your gift with us!

Hugs! sita:)

I am totally unfamiliar with KOTOR, but I'm still enjoying this story. Buffy and Faith are two of my favorite characters, especially when they're fighting together. Good job!

I like it!