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Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from garrycooper
Review:
It's Great!!!! More please.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but this series has completely lost my interest so it's finished.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from oldgirllost
Review:
Too bad it wasn't continued--I like it.
Comments from author:
The first story (aka chapter) is complete and finished. I added the other chapters as inspiration struck and there's still a chance inspiration will strike again. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from Katt
Review:
Oh please, please, PLEASE write more of this!! I've been really depressed lately and I almost embarassed myself reading this I was laughing so freaking hard. It felt REALLY good to laugh... so pleeeaaasssee? =) I'll give ya a cookie? Or the bunny some new cedar bedding or a carrot covered in caramel! YEAH that's the ticket... maybe?

Katt
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it, but I have no plans to continue this series in the near future. I have the first scene of the next ficlet written, but that's about all that's been done with it. Sorry. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Katt] • Date [10 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from winnie
Review:
darn, got to pay more attention to these unfinished stories.
this could be a really good story with a good sense of humor
Review By [winnie] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from apollo
Review:
Are you ever planning on continuing this?
Comments from author:
There are a few more ficlets plotted out, but nothing written as of yet.
Review By [apollo] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from Gideon
Review:
Cool story, and very funny too. I'd love to see some more at some stage.
Perhaps we could see Buffy's reaction when Daniel suggests the Infirmary staff do some tests on him?

*Edit*
I think the infirmary might find out about his strength reflexes and faster than human healing - She doesn't want her body stuck in a military base forever!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm not sure if the muse will add more to this story because it was suppose to end with chapter one and then there were request for more so I've continued it with the odd ficlet or two. Though I'm unsure as to why Buffy would care should the infirmary decide to run tests. They haven't the ability to test for the mystical. ;)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from nightshadowlife
Review:
This is just too good! Please continue with the story!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from jezaeiri
Review:
If I offer the bunny some cedar chips and pixie stix do you think it will come visit?

Great so far.

Hope to see more eventually.
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "But Most of all I wish" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
OK, I am giving that low score because I'm pissed. The story was well written and interesting and very funny, but this is the second story of yours in a row that I've read, and it's the second story in a row that in my opinion was unfinished.

And the 'end' was unclear. What happened? Did Daniel get slayer strength in his body? What happened with the burns? I wasn't even sure what happened to Buffy's body. Did they ever change back? The story just STOPS. That's just poor.

I also started out liking your story "Beyond Hope", but that was even worse. It just stopped. It's as if you get tired with an idea, and just write 'the end'. I'd prefer a SAD ending to NO ending. I don't think I'll be reading any more of your stories ever. I wish there was an anti-recommendation because that's exactly what you'd get from me. Check out my other reviews for most stories. I don't flame in reviews. Usually when I find a bad story, I just don't bother to rate it or don't review it at all. But what you did was sadistic and/or incompetent.

Just so you know: you turned a story that might have been a nine or even a ten into a nothing. Go you.
Comments from author:
**Edited: I've realized no response would have been better than an angry response. Sorry.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from spring
Review:
This is finished? I really really hope that you wrote a sequle. I love this it's exteremly funny.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from Scrappychic
Review:
I love this. Great story, though the story seems far from complete but the table at the top of the page shows the story IS complete?

Please tell me that there's going to be more to come in this adventure!!!
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "But Most of all I wish" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I loved this! So happy to see it isn't a one-shot!

Great reactions from both Buffy and Daniel. *snicker* Poor Danny boy has to wear a thongsy.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from jessie
Review:
Funny, I liked it but it didn't feel complete.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The first story was the complete story and any chapter that follows is just a drabble or ficlet continuing the 'verse.
Review By [jessie] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Hmmm... you did mention dragging Jack into this mess. Any chance we'll get to see that, and the rest of the story? *looks hopeful and bats baby blues* Pretty please?

Edit to reply: No worries, I'm just glad that you shared this one, because I really enjoyed it. :-)
Comments from author:
Sorry but at this time I won't be adding any to this story. I'm trying to finish my WIP's first and since the first chapter of this story is the stand alone and the rest are just drabbles and ficlets continuing in the 'verse that means it's not on the list of needs to be finished. Sorry again and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [6 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Cookies and Aliens" from Lisa
Review:
What? You can't end it there. This is all too funny! We need more... *Looks under the computer in hopes of finding more* C'mon Ava hun I need more. This is hilarious and how much do I love Buffy/Vala friendship now? Hello goodness!
Comments from author:
There will be more I just have to get my muse out of her obsession with darkness and torture so that she can be funny again. *grins* I do so love the Buffy/Vala dynamic. Those two just play so well off each other.

Thank you for taking the time to review sweets!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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