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garrycooperReview:
Great! This story cries out for continuation.
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garrycooper] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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FireWolfeReview:
I loved it more would be fun.
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FireWolfe] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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MarbleGloveReview:
Wonderful. I would love to see more interaction between Bra'tec and Faith or any of the other slayers. I particularly liked Faith's description of Bra'tec as an old guy who could kick serious ass. Keep writing.
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MarbleGlove] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SunstarReview:
I'd love to see more, but this was perfect. Sam's question was great.
Review By [
Sunstar] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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azulkanReview:
Really enjoyed this one.
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azulkan] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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PaBurkeReview:
Fun! Parts needed a little filling in but you got your point across. All in all, it was an enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
Sorry I'm responding two months later, but oh well.
I was aiming to take out all the backstory and inner monologue that I tend to ramble on with; it makes for nice flow, but I wanted to try being concise. I see what you mean - I don't think it worked quite as I would have liked, but then, it was a bit of an experiment. Thanks for telling me - I wasn't sure how well it came out.
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PaBurke] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Not Rated