You should totally continue this. I absolutely loved it. Especially the way Jack kept focusing on drinking.

lol
that was quite dilightful. Go buffy!!

You're funny. I like funny.

Keep writing

tonisimone

Great start to this story please continue it.

Ooooh, more please.

Great story, i hope you continue may be merge the X-Men/Stargate/Buffy together?

Excellant Chapter! Jack's POV was very funny!:)

Exactly why would a Goa'uld do the HULK SMASH all alone on Earth and without his armies of Jaffa?

^^;; The Hulk Smash? I like that.. To be quite honest, this was my first time writing Stargate. Though it's not an excuse, even I didn't think it would be completely perfect. Thanks for bringing up your point. I'll improve my writing if you keep reviewing.

::laughs:: and that's just how everyone would act too.

I like how Jack handled the situation at the end.

Oh yeah, Buff really is lucky with her encounters. Except for Xander, she probably IS the unluckiest in this fashion!!!

Fantastic! Shame Jack didn't actually get round to asking her out though... I would really love to see a sequel.

Definitely worth continuing - there's not nearly enough Buffy-centric stories on this site, and it would be great to see another...especially a Stargate crossover...and especially a well-written, multi-chapter one! (In case you couldn't tell, that was a HINT ;P )

I'm sort of ambivilent about Dawn - some days I hate her, some days I adore her. I haven't read that many stories with "teenager" Dawn...with all that it would entail. And for some reason, a clumsy Dawn just popped into my head - you know, knocking things over in Daniel's office, and claiming that her brain hasn't caught up with her growing body, and she thinks her arms are shorter than they actually are. Weird, eh?

OK, enough with the babbling. Long story short...please continue.

Please keep going! giggle, snicker...

MORE!!! But please make it Buffy/Jack PLEASE