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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
So I guess they are watching Star Wars again?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from danielbuffyfan
Review:
You should totally continue this. I absolutely loved it. Especially the way Jack kept focusing on drinking.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
lol
that was quite dilightful. Go buffy!!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [8 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tonisimone
Review:
You're funny. I like funny.

Keep writing

tonisimone
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [12 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BARON
Review:
Great start to this story please continue it.
Review By [BARON] • Date [7 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CindyB
Review:
Ooooh, more please.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [2 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, i hope you continue may be merge the X-Men/Stargate/Buffy together?
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [24 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thesithspawn
Review:
Excellant Chapter! Jack's POV was very funny!:)
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
Review:
Exactly why would a Goa'uld do the HULK SMASH all alone on Earth and without his armies of Jaffa?
Comments from author:
^^;; The Hulk Smash? I like that.. To be quite honest, this was my first time writing Stargate. Though it's not an excuse, even I didn't think it would be completely perfect. Thanks for bringing up your point. I'll improve my writing if you keep reviewing.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from redrikki
Review:
::laughs:: and that's just how everyone would act too.
Review By [redrikki] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like how Jack handled the situation at the end.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vld
Review:
Oh yeah, Buff really is lucky with her encounters. Except for Xander, she probably IS the unluckiest in this fashion!!!
Review By [Vld] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Fantastic! Shame Jack didn't actually get round to asking her out though... I would really love to see a sequel.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sheilynn
Review:
Definitely worth continuing - there's not nearly enough Buffy-centric stories on this site, and it would be great to see another...especially a Stargate crossover...and especially a well-written, multi-chapter one! (In case you couldn't tell, that was a HINT ;P )

I'm sort of ambivilent about Dawn - some days I hate her, some days I adore her. I haven't read that many stories with "teenager" Dawn...with all that it would entail. And for some reason, a clumsy Dawn just popped into my head - you know, knocking things over in Daniel's office, and claiming that her brain hasn't caught up with her growing body, and she thinks her arms are shorter than they actually are. Weird, eh?

OK, enough with the babbling. Long story short...please continue.
Review By [Sheilynn] • Date [20 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ferball
Review:
Please keep going! giggle, snicker...
Review By [ferball] • Date [20 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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