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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IrFane
Review:
Good story. :o)
Review By [IrFane] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♥captivating♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [14 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Great story and I loved the ending, but you really should have separated the Author Guy section a bit more.

AG was fine for a plot device, it just needs to be firmly separated from the story's body. If you read 'Puffin' like there's no Tomorrow' you'll see how I separated my 4th wall breakage from the body of the story itself.

Xander and Callisto going on vacation and stumbling on the 'false gods' sounds like a good setup for a fic.

Have I introduced Xander to Ollie? Hmmm, definitely an oversight on my part.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review, this story was written a long time ago and even now I admit that Author Guy was a pretty lame plot device. I've been trying to write lately but real life seems to be getting in the way and I have writer's block that would stop a Decepticon.

How does this sound for a plot bunny, Xander and Callisto go to the SGC?

Read some of your stuff also, very interesting indeed. Lacking an Anchor is hilarious and really needs to be continued, more interraction between slightly insane Xander and the Bat. More Xander and Ollie giving Bruce a Bat migraine. More flirting with assorted DCU Superheroines and Villainesses
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
Review:
Damn, a Solid 10!!!! Loved this wild and wacky tale! I don't give 10'a never, uh uh never no how, but Hot Spit was this good. I really liked the Author Guy interludes too. Yup Xander is The Guy, but I too have a soft spot for Willow. Suffice it to say that I loved the story. Don't be a stranger, Remember the First is in the offing, and Xena and Co. could be such a help!
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [9 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)drdeth
Review:
10 out of 10, please a sequel
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)drdeth
Review:
10 out of 10, please a sequel
Review By [(Current Donor)drdeth] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TOM
Review:
I bow in front of Author Guy.Good Job!
This story was highly enjoyable to read (a little short,may be and... easy resolution? Not really my taste...but very good nonetheless.This need a sequel!)
Review By [TOM] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from XanLickquidluv
Review:
Will agree that the first 'author guy' section was a jolt, then I read it, enjoyed it and treated it like a
funny commercial then back to the story. While you couldn't decide whether this was an action or
a comedy, both elements were treated evenly with neither overshadowing the other. I suspect if
you stick to one element, you will be more than inspired to delve deeper into them and give me even
more to giggle about or read avidly to find out what happens next.

Be that as it may, your character interactions were interesting and engaging, and I really enjoyed
your pairing of Xander and Callisto. Have not seen that before and it was really well done and very
believably written. Keep writing, but maybe treat the 'author guy' bits like commercials and not
essential plot points.
Review By [XanLickquidluv] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Questara
Review:
If you take out the whole Author-guy parts, it will be a pretty good story.
Review By [Questara] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HolyKnight
Review:
you broke the 4th wall law.......
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cwolf
Review:
Sorry, it was getting good until Author guy first appeared. Then I jumped to the end, saw the same thing and clicked review. better luck next time. *grin*
Review By [cwolf] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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