Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Krysstinia
I liked this, but I think that Buffy was being cruel. She shouldn't lead Dean on if she has not intention of following through. It's different if he knows that nothing is ever going to happen, but I didn't get that sense.
Review By [Krysstinia
] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loyaleskamoe
It was funny and well written. You have a magnificent handle on all the characters portrayed. I only hope that I can match this quality myself. Your interaction and blending of the two verses was so natural. If I didn't know better, I'd say everyone was from the same show. I like the amount of depth you put into this story. Even on a one shot, I feel as though you should treat it like an ongoing story. Because for your characters, it is! Their lives don't end when the story's done. Usually. And I like how this story makes me feel like there's more going on before and after this little slice of their lives.
Kudos and thanks for writing such a great fic!
Comments from author:
Oh my goodness, thank you! I wasn't expecting this when I saw I had a review! *jumps excitedly*
Review By [loyaleskamoe
] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from link
This fic is great. I like the way you potray all the characters.
Review By [link
] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kristi
This story was really good and interesting. I really enjoyed the pipe dart, Buffy calling Sam "Sammy" and the unloading of the gun line.
But once i got to the end, it didn't feel complete. There was too much information an too much plot development for it to feel like a decisive ending. Will Dean jump out the air lock? Will Buffy die even with the brothers with her? It seems like there's a lot still unresolved, and the ending is a bit premature. Are you sure you want this to be a one-shot.
Comments from author:
I know, I know.... I was trying to go for an ending that was to keep people guessing... I probably could have done that without ending so abruptly... I may go back to fix the ending... Fleshing it out, but still leaving to keep the viewer guessing as to what happens...
Not sure, maybe I'll make it a two-shot! :) Thank you for the review!
Review By [Kristi
] • Date [21 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]