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demonbornslaygalReview:
Very interesting, an unusual solution to Harry's problem. I like it.
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demonbornslaygal] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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EricaReview:
Actually I fall into the love it catagory. It actually makes sense for the books as well since he was told he had part of Voldie magic accidently put into him as a baby. Good job.
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Erica] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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dharkcharlotteReview:
I liked it. Very interesting. It does pose many questions of course. Like... Who turned him? How did he keep his focus as a fledge to go after V?
Comments from author:
The focus as a fledge is a good point. I didn't think of that. Maybe something to do with his magic? I'll probably elaborate on that in the multi-chap I'm working on that this is a tag for
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dharkcharlotte] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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BrendanMReview:
okay... not bad.
You could have done a little more on the confrontation with Voldie, though. And perhaps a bit with whichever Vamp got him.
I smiled at the "Barbecue Fork Murderer" bit.
Comments from author:
Actually, this is a bit of a tag for a multi-chapter fic I'm working on. It's almost ready to be Beta'd, then I'll be putting it up.
It centers around Dawn and Hermoine's little sister Kiley, but there's a sub plot involving Hermione running into Vampire Harry in a club.
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BrendanM] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
