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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cute :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
love it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
The low(er) rating because:

1.) When you disagree in a formal vote, the opposite of the "aye" or "yay" is the "nay," kind of like what a horsey says.

Interesting little bit there, I'm curious what the story is (eventually) going to be about. Neat beginning, if the "debates" get a little confusing. I'll read on ...
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [17 May 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TarnishedGold
Review:
Oh! I just love mini Jack stories. I love that they just feel he fits and can't explain why. No to mention Robin needs to be put in his place more often. Keep up the good work.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [5 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from morange
Review:
oh god... mini-jack around dozens of super-powered girls and a huge 'protect them' hormone? this is gonna spell trouble down the line. except if its a drabble then its a good stop. well um
Bye!
Morrie
Review By [morange] • Date [23 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a great idea! Any chance of sequels to this, now that the 'stay or go' question has been resolved in the young man's favor? I'd love to find out what happens next.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I guessed when Jack said, ' ... best physical education curriculums ...'
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
*Wonderful* surprise crossover.
And to think I nearly skipped this one...

I never guessed until the very end. And I think that our male applicant (don't want to name him - why spoil people?) would be an excellent addition.
I hope you decide to continue this story line - it could be terrific.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I really don't like Robin and so found this highly enjoyable.

Jonathan Jackson must surely be Jack O'Neill's clone... but I read his name as Jack-Jack which is the baby from The Incredibles.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vld
Review:
Yoohoo! Go Clone O'Neill! I just knew from the very beginning that it would be him!!!! Er... I AM right, am I? I mean, Jonathan is supposedly Jack's given name, and well, people DO call him Jack! And Jackson? Please, can we say Daniel?
Comments from author:
Your definitely right. : )
Review By [Vld] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ciupa
Review:
love it
You actually managed to get little jack in without making it sound all corny and stuff (:
Anyway i really hope there are going to be more chapters!!!...plz,PLZ with sugar on top (:
Review By [Ciupa] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
If the school is supposed to be named for Robin's mother her name was Nikki, not Kendra.
Comments from author:
The school is named after both Kendra, the slayer that was killed by Drusilla and Robin's mom, Nikki Wood. I combined their names. It's kind of an homage to past slayers.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from freetodream
Review:
Ok...that was just awesome-way to invite the clone into the picture. Do I get a prize cause I guess right? I'm kinda curious as to why Robin thought clone Jack wouldn't make it, but maybe there's a story there, eh? Anyway...loved how all the girls present were all for him being there-mini-Jack (ah that's his nick name) and General Jack all have that quality about them...making girls swoon without realizing it and I'm babbling...please add more
Review By [freetodream] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalwizardelffan
Review:
LMAO! Jonathon Jackson... yeahsureyoubetcha. *snorts* Not only a good cover name for the clone of Colonel Jack O'Neill of Stargate, but it's also the name of a real life actor (the original actor who played Lucky Spencer on General Hospital, from 1988-2000).
Comments from author:
I'd forgotten that was also that actors name. Do you think I should call him Lucky? ::wink::
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WingL
Review:
Love the story. Maybe another? Pleeeaaasse!?!?
Review By [WingL] • Date [23 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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