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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Althalus
This is a promising start.
I wonder why you never continued.

It looks like an interesting story. I wonder what you came up with for the buried secrets ;-)
At least I hope you still managed to write something but haven't posted it.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Deanie
Nice beginning. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [2 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ladysiren
me likies this.
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Review By [ladysiren] • Date [31 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TarnishedGold
::chuckles softly:: I can't help but wonder what Willow's reaction will be to Booth. Interesting premise. Keep up the good work.
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It's unlikely that Willow will meet Booth in person in this one. She may catch a glimps of him over the computer and there might be a chance that they meet at the very end, depending on how that scene plays out.
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [26 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamJames
Interesting set up. It's much more plausible than the usual secret relative stories. But if the government feared what people might discover in Sunnydale, couldn't it just declare the area unsafe. Besides the Scoobies already know who died. Still, I'm looking forward to Willow's encounter with an Angel look-alike.
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I’m glad you think the set up’s interesting. In response to your comment, remember the Initiative was a super secret military organization. That means that only a very small branch of the government associated with the military’s secret projects would know about it. That fraction wouldn’t have enough strength to keep forensic teams out without casting some suspicion on why. The vast majority of the government (and military) assumes that it was a freak accident that sunk Sunnydale and want to give the people who lost friends or family in it some closure (yes Sunnydale was basically a Ghost town when it happened, but they would do it anyway just incase some people refused to leave).
Review By [SamJames] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
This is a very interesting set-up. I look forward to seeing where your story goes.
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Thanks, I figured this was one of the most plausable ways to get a member of each group together.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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