Phew! That was quite a first chapter. Hope the NID folks got some punishment for stooping to blackmail - but I suppose they'll get bonuses and promotions instead.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
You have done an excellent job with this story and it have been added to my list of CoA nominee candidates.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Great story. I was following it from Champions All (which is also a great story). I love the way you have captured the characters. They come alive in your story and I can picture them as if they were on the television in front of me. Keep it up.
Review By [Odin] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Something tells me that he should have headed her warning.
::Gives the plot bunny a cup of blueberry soup::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Hope you haven't abandoned, although have noticed last few updates have been farther apart.
This is a very good story with good humor. Fascinating cross-overs and I like the way you've got the Goa'uld using magic and have Wolfram and Hart added into the mix.
I really liked Glory's line, "You just see how smart you'd be if somebody else was using half your brain,"
Review By [draconis] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Excellent story so far and I am already looking forward to see where you will take this story next.
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot pie::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated