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Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Zarthrax
Review:
Two years' wait is long enough. Please Update! :)
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from draconis
Review:
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Hoping it's time for another of the more-or-less annual updates...

The sheer pandemonium in this story is part of the fun.
Review By [draconis] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Yup, another one I reread when I run out of new material. Hope the NewYear finds you well.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Godogma
Review:
Excellent continuation, looking forward to seeing what happens next. Though I would like to see more of Xander and see some positive interaction between him and the Scoobs or Mutants.
Comments from author:
well at the moment he is kinda in the weeds, no worries though, there will be interaction between them soon enough... Positive isn't guaranteed though.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. The weight of the 50 cal bullet was way off though. Also you seem to use capital letters where you shouldn't. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it, the weight of the 50 is what the Army Supply Depot in N.C. quoted me when questioned, as for the capitalization issues, yeah that is one of my bigger issues but i will be trying to keep an eye on that.

thanks
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I wonder if Deadpool is hallucinating? It would be funny to see him 'meet' Denace the Menace. "Hey there Mister Wilson!"
Comments from author:
Funny, i hope you enjoyed the fic.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from eriktheviking
Review:
A bad day all around, although Tick Tock made me laugh. Great stuff and thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Tick-Tock kinda surprised me in how easily he wanted to join the fray.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Copperhead
Review:
Always nice to see this updated - keep it up.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it, and i will try.
Review By [Copperhead] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from trongod
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Good to see you back with this; loved the growing insanity of deadly characters wandering the streets of SunnyHell - and just imagine what it'll be like once Xander and later Logan hit town!!

REALLY hoping that Faith is on the up and up in this; Willow needs all the help she can get right now and Faith has started making inroads with her. That and I really think she and Willow /could/ become true friends if writers and such would just let'em!!

Pity Sheila hasn't met up with one of the many people wanting her dead, but maybe Xander can interrogate her before she dies and find that she bugged her house, which was what allowed her to capture him so quickly - not that it was Wilow's telling her after swearing to him she would tell no one. Xander really needs some solid ground beneath him, and Willow has been that nearly his entire life so finding she never betrayed him would be a major boon in his currently messed up life.

Loved the turn around of the now-Colonel; hope he survives to bring down Stryker and Co. And speaking of being brought down, when do we get to see some disasters happening to Wolf, Ram, and Hart? S.H.E.I.L.D. now has them on radar and locked on, and that's just a part of the gathering hammer over their heads!
Comments from author:
I'm glad i got back to it, Sheila will have her time, no worries there and you will discover how she figured it out, but wither Xander is there or not is still not decided.

as for the Colonel and WR&H... no worries, they shall soon discover a whole new level of 'Crap' preparing to descend upon them in new and interesting ways.
Review By [trongod] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from Eureka
Review:
Good story..just one question. If Xander only told Wills about his mutation...HOW did her Mom find out? And WHY the heck would the daughter of Magneto say that he was just a mutant? SHE is a mutant! Which means that Wills is also a mutant (unless it skipped a generation which is not likely) Also wondering if Xander does make it to Sunnydale before they take out Shelia, will he spare Wills and give her a chance to speak?
Comments from author:
the HOW hasn't been explained yet, no worries it will be revealed.

Back when Eric first came into his powers he already had a wife and several children, after revealing himself his wife fled with the children and Eric 'Officially' never saw them again, those children actually never became mutants moving instead to the U.S. several times though Magneto would look in on them to make sure they were ok, but there was no signs that they were ever mutants.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from LFW
Review:
Good read
Easy to follow too, I am a bit surprised because you have so many different assassins moving around Sunnydale . . . truly an excellent fic
Thanks
Hoping for more soon and I do so hope that Xander does not just lash out at Buffy, Faith, Giles or Willow
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it, it was certainly fun to write.

as for Xander... he is going to have issues wither or not it happened to be focused on Buffy and Co. or not is something to be seen.
Review By [LFW] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Love this story. Glad to see an update. Can't wait for more. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVIII" from CageFire
Review:
Ah, I haven't seen an update to this in a while. As I recall this is the one where it's gotten really complicated really quickly. It's a bit of chaos now. I'm wondering how you're going to sort it all out.
Comments from author:
very, very carefully...
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Weapon XH XVII" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Just blitzed through all 17 chapters of this... Nice mix of the various incarnations of the Marvel'verse. Hope that you still revisit ideas for it from time to time, 'cause I still want to see Xander and Willow come to terms. He deserves to know what actually happened (since I'm sure she didn't tell her Mom). Anyhow, just want to let you know your older works are still appreciated. Hope your muse is generous.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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