This is a great story, Please continue writing this along with your others. If you need a Beta-reader I would like to volunteer for any stories that need it.
Review By [Wyeth] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
An interesting story so far. I've always enjoyed watching Walker and remember the episodes with the chairman well. It should be interesting to see how his hacker stands up to Willow. I look forward to seeing future chapters of this.
Promising start; I'm impatient to see where you go with it. Don't romanticize the Rangers, though; non-Anglo and non-white folks know too much about the early history of the organization (kinda like the American Legion).
Review By [orangemike] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Ooh, this has the makings of one fun crossover. Xander and Willow helping out Walker? Fun. Hope we see a scene of Xander slurping down CD's chili like there's no tomorrow and everyone staring at him wondering how he can stand the heat. :) Keep it coming!!
Review By [captuniv] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh, this is a very cool beginning. It will be fun to see Willow operating as a alpha hacker rather than an apprentice witch. Plus, I hope being around the Rangers reactivates some of Xander's Soldier Spirit skills. I look forward to seeing how you continue this story.
Liking this so far.... your English expression "not in the script" makes Xander seem aware of the fourth wall like in those She-Hulk Comics. Not sure if that's what you wanted in demonstrating Xander's ability to draw a conclusion from the existing circumstances. Looking forward to more of this story.
Comments from author:
When Xander said, "It's in the script" he meant he knew how she'd react to being out of prison. Even if the hacker was under guard wearing an electic bracelet.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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