I don't get it why did you stop writing. It's starts so promising and you didn't updated at all. I don't understand that you can abandoned such a good story. A well can't do much about it only you can.

This story had a great beginning! You did an incredible job putting all the players into place.

Just thought you should know that if you ever picked it up again then I would love to read it.

Thanks for sharing your vision and ideas.

Okay, seriously you have got to come back and update this story! I mean, leaving this unfinished is like...like a...crime or something equally horrible. There is just so much potential here that I'm nearly bursting with anticipation as to which direction your fic will go. So please, don't be evil...come back. lol! If these first to chapters are any indication of your writing skills, then I'm pretty sure your fic is gona be one hell of ride!

P.S. Can't wait for some Buffy/Jack banter!

Aw come on! More!

PLEASE update this wonderful fic!

PLEASE update this wonderful fic!

Very good beginning. I hope you intend to continue it.

Very interesting, but as much as I want to know what you are going to do with Buffy, leaving the Scooby meeting where you did is just mean.

More, please. You've got a very good setup here for an interesting story, and I'd love to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

good

A promising beginning. Please return and continue this story.

very cool, although if i were whistler i would have said "you can trust most of them or some of them"

good work, looking forward to more

ps. i wonder what Thor and/or the Nox will think of her

More soon, please? I can not wait to see what happens next!

A promising start. I hope we'll see some more soon.

Thanks.

Cool I look forward to reading more. Please update again soon.