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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very good follow-on sequel!!! I would like to read more. However, that appears unlikely as belgentei wrote this 1st chapter going on six years ago. Though, if the author is still around, perhaps the impossible is possible.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [25 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Odin
Review:
Just re-read this and Of Gates and Mouths. It's a great story. I hope you will pick it up again soon.
Review By [Odin] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Very Good start. Please continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I will try and post part two as soon as I can.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [28 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
Interesting so far, and Of Gates and Mouths was also an interesting story (even though I found it somewhat rushed... but then again, this is fanfic, not a full-fledged book). Looking forward to the next chapters.
Comments from author:
Thanks. We will have to see how that goes!
Review By [Marcel] • Date [23 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Traveler2
Review:
I first read Of Gates and Mouths on the Mystic Muse site and found great joy. In fact I have reread it several times waiting for a sequel. I just found TTH and to my joy I found Chapter 1 of a sequel posted here. I will be back often to check for further chapters to a story I really liked.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I am a little hung-up on this one at the moment but hopefully will get back to it so!

Blessings

Dave
Review By [Traveler2] • Date [10 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A very promising beginning, and I'm beginning to be won over by your "Jack O'Neill won't be okay with working with Slayers anytime soon" approach to his character. Given what we saw on SG1 over the years, your insistence on reminding us that Jack IS first a military officer and does not necessarily always play well with others (especially when his whole world-view is being called into question) seems quite believable.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and sorry for taking so long to reply, first real life then having general internet connection problems, well woe is me!

Yes as I have said before there are all those stories out there with Buffy and Jack getting along from the start that I wanted to do it differently. But I do think they will start to have a grudging respect for each other when they start working together... Or possibly kill each other lol.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Apr 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BARON
Review:
Great start to this story i really have been looking forward to reading this sequel as i enjoyed your first story (gates and mouths) very much.Please post again as soon as you can.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and sorry for taking so long to reply, first real life then having general internet connection problems.

Originally this part and part of the next chapter made up the epilogue of the previous story but the more I went over it, the more it made sense to change it so Of Gates and Mouths ended where it does on this site. The only part of chapter two that needs sorting out is the Council meeting, which was not actually written as part of ‘Of Gates’. I hope to be in a position to post it soon.
Review By [BARON] • Date [4 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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