I'm really enjoying this, but wanted to point out one kinda major typo or wrong word or something that you might want to correct. Usually I don't, but... yeah. Anyway:
'Buffy staked another vampire before tossing her stake to Spider-man. "Here, take this." She pulled another one from her backside.'
What with the pulling stakes out of her backside and the bad mental images therein. Off to keep reading!
Review By [dreamfall] • Date [16 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Woah! Those two stories just completely took my breath away; I have no idea how you can have that many characters, and yet still have every single person completely in character! The dialogue, especially, was simply brilliant.
Review of story "The Web of Our Life" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great surprise cast of characters! (Of course, if I actually *read* author's notes, they mightn't have been surprises, eh?)
Your action sequences were fluid and sent my adrenalin levels through the roof!
Thanks for writing!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Web of Our Life" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great follow through on the story. You kept up the action non stop, with great dialog between the three groups. A really neat tale that wove three (or four) different universes together effectively. Definitely something I'd recommend!
houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 May 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Web of Our Life" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oooh, more soon please? I love how you wrote in Spiderman too. :) Great job!
~Kaz
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 May 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Web of Our Life" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh, neat! And here I was asking for a sequel. And crossedover with Spiderman none the less. Still with the snappy dialogue and good characterizations, I definitely look forward to reading the rest of this whenever it gets posted.
houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 May 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment