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Review of chapter "Trunks" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
poor Andrew.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from TwoBlackDragons
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Typo I spotted, it's in the brackets.
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Andrew shifted his head on the weapon’s bag, thankful that Willow had made them all tear-proof. That way he couldn’t accidentally behead himself while in the [truck] of a car all tied up. But, now that he thought about it, that sword that he was leaning against should be able to help him take off the gag.


trunk

BTW you made this typo three times.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
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He exchanged the books and the laptop for a gym bag full of weapons.

And collapsed to the ground with its weight.

Slayers shouldn’t be allowed to fill weapon bags, he decided.


A Perfect line for Andrew. It made me laugh out loud.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from Amai
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Excellent!

I love all the references, and especially the nerd swearing. I think I'm going wander around for the next few weeks going 'sith' every time I bump a toe or burn a finger.

Poor Andrew. Although I think he has fun. He's certainly fun to read about. At least when you're writing him.

Thanks for posting.
Review By [Amai] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trunks" from spring
Review:
I love it.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from Marcel
Review:
Incredibly funny. I definitely have to see about getting Season One of NCIS.
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Just so you know, it's only your fault. I watched the first three seasons of NCIS, and the fourth up to now, and now I'm stuck with waiting for each episode. Like having to wait for Stargate wasn't bad enough .
Comments from author:
Yes, yes! Support NCIS! Such fun characters.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pits" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from IndraLeigh
Review:
I am completely enjoying this story. Please continue on with it.
Review By [IndraLeigh] • Date [8 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trunks" from RevDorothyL
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A perfect Andrew's POV take on the whole thing. Of COURSE Andrew would be used to being tied up and locked away, even by people he's friends with! And of course, DiNozzo would show up just in time to get knocked out.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trunks" from DorothyGralow
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Okay, it wasn't all Andrew's fault, but he should know better than to ever trust Faith. Excellent follow up. Dorothy
Review By [DorothyGralow] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trunks" from (Current Donor)romero
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I enjoyed your story. Your voice of Andrew is spot on and I had to laugh at his thoughts.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trunks" from WhiteWolf
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Would they really hit Tony over the head? Well, you can expect everything from Faith. But for Buffy to do it? I have my doubt about it, but it might depend on her mood. She can have a violent temper after all, but against Tony ...?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pits" from spurious
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Snicker. So why the incense and when does Buffy get her b-day present back?
Review By [spurious] • Date [14 Apr 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pits" from morange
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yay, this i'd give andrews morale a boost
Review By [morange] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pits" from WhiteWolf
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I like it. and I'm sure Buffy is going to want her whip back.
Comments from author:
hmm, good point, but I don't know that I'll write it.

. . . maybe a little epilogue . . .
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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