Typo I spotted, it's in the brackets. ************************
Andrew shifted his head on the weapon’s bag, thankful that Willow had made them all tear-proof. That way he couldn’t accidentally behead himself while in the [truck] of a car all tied up. But, now that he thought about it, that sword that he was leaning against should be able to help him take off the gag.
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BTW you made this typo three times.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love all the references, and especially the nerd swearing. I think I'm going wander around for the next few weeks going 'sith' every time I bump a toe or burn a finger.
Poor Andrew. Although I think he has fun. He's certainly fun to read about. At least when you're writing him.
Incredibly funny. I definitely have to see about getting Season One of NCIS. *** Just so you know, it's only your fault. I watched the first three seasons of NCIS, and the fourth up to now, and now I'm stuck with waiting for each episode. Like having to wait for Stargate wasn't bad enough .
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Yes, yes! Support NCIS! Such fun characters.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
A perfect Andrew's POV take on the whole thing. Of COURSE Andrew would be used to being tied up and locked away, even by people he's friends with! And of course, DiNozzo would show up just in time to get knocked out.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Would they really hit Tony over the head? Well, you can expect everything from Faith. But for Buffy to do it? I have my doubt about it, but it might depend on her mood. She can have a violent temper after all, but against Tony ...?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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