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Review of chapter "Moonfall" from TrevaRea
Review:
First time reading this. Very interesting and would have loved to see a sequel.

Thanks,
Treva Rea
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from Selonianth
Review:
Did Illyria just... adopt him as her new guide?
Comments from author:
Pretty much. =)
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Yes! I'm so glad to see that this story wound up receiving the award for best portrayal of Illyria! I've always thought it was spot on and I love this story to pieces. Congratulations!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Totally a great story.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from purrfus
Review:
Definitely deserving of more. The Fred / Illyria was just great, and the ideas about Daniel are just maddening.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Found this via COA! Absolutely wonderful!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I wonder how Lorne took the news... Truly awesome :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
I adore this fic!!! It was frickin' awesome! You covered all the bases. I only wish that it was a chapter story instead of a one-shot. Fantastic job!!!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [4 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from PatriciaLouise
Review:
This was great! I had never heard of the Daniel/Illyria ship until I came here. I liked the bit about Illyria being a Furling. Great fic!
Review By [PatriciaLouise] • Date [4 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Great way to fill in that largely untold part of the "Gate Virus" episode (whatever it was called), and wonderful use of Illyria! Will she and Daniel have any future encounters?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Ooooooh...I LOVE it! I always liked Fred, and liked Illyria just as much. Interesting twist to make her one of the Furlings! I don't suppose there are any more plot bunnies of Illyria running around, are there? *looks hopeful* Also, I have to say that I very much enjoy your writing. Great stuff!!! :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Wow!! I just discovered this and LOVED it. On that last note, I think she will want to return to Daniel at some point. In other words, I'd love a sequel!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from banner
Review:
WOW!
Terrific story! It's wonderful in every way. The characterization of Jackson was perfect, and the way you portrayed Illyria's actions was great. Daniel's slow realization was reminiscent of the very best suspense/horror movies. I'll be thinking about the implications of this one for a long long time. The possibilities are stunning.
Great job. Thanks.
Review By [banner] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Making the Old Ones Furlings, that's a new approach, but not a very convincing one, at least not to me. But otherwise I like the story. I've read a story where the Furlings are Werewolves and Oz becomes important person to them, like a teacher to them. I'm wondering if somebody is going to update that story, now if I just can remember the title. *Grin*
Comments from author:
The only problem with Furlings being werewolves is that, per the story of Dakara, the Ancients wiped this galaxy of *all life* when they were dying of their plague. The Nox presumably protected themselves with their magic/tech, and the Asgard live in a different galaxy, but everything else perished. *Millions* of years ago. Do you know how much change has happened to Humans in just the past 10,000 years? No species could remain the same over that great a span of time, unless they were (a) taken out of the game or (b) from a really static culture, which could in no stretch of the imagination apply to such a hot-blooded breed of creature.

Werewolves make for an interesting case as Furlings in pre-S8 SG-1 canon, and I think I've read the story you're speaking of, and yes it was interesting. But from a post-S8 perspective, and speaking as one who tries to keep as close to canon as possible, they aren't plausible anymore. I thought, with a little tweaking, the Old Ones might fit the bill. I didn't get into every detail of my reasoning in the story, as I'd like to save a few plot points for possible future extensions, but my beta, my muse and I all thought it made sense, so I ran with it.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moonfall" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice story, any chance of a sequel?
Dave T.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [7 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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