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Still My Girl

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Review of chapter "A Normal Something" from Specks
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I must admit, the first chapter for me was just a tad bit discouraging, but you pulled through quite valiantly. My suggestion would be to cut the first chapter entirely and just skip to chapter two. There's a lot more meat after the initial summaries. The concept is very interesting and the title is really rather appropirate.
Review By [Specks] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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