For not updating this wonderful fic I have to wonder are you evil? I love this fic so far please please please find it in you heart to update this wonderful fic again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really like how you've started this story and look forward to seeing where you plan on taking it. Sorry about the rating but I never give too high a score solely based on the first couple of chapters.
Review By [pheonxrising] • Date [19 Apr 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I really liked the beginning of this story! It has so much potential! I really hope that you continue it. I however would like to give you my opinion on the whole Xander being one-eyed; I would love to see him get it back after all a White Knight will need two good eyes to protect the lovely Charmed Ones. Just my opinion take it for what it's worth (basically nothing). I know I will love our story no matter how many eyes Xander has because he is just so nummy!!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
An interesting start. But I think your pairings of Buffy, Dawn and Piper might be pretty OOC. Especially Dawn and Piper, have a hard time seeing them as gay. Still, a good start.