Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from greysh
Great fic! I loved it :) Xander and harry are a great couple.
Review By [greysh
] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from WmGeorge
This was wonderful -- your characters and their relationship were both developed in a natural and beautiful way. The story itself was terrific ... nice to see Xander pushed into a more prominent role. Also nice to add the bit about how the Wiccan world views him. It was great that he finally saw how crucial his role had always been.
I can't say much about Harry, because I've neither read the books nor seen the movies. But I thoroughly enjoyed his character as well. I thought the bit about him and Draco was a nice touch. Even without having personal experience of Harry Potter Land, I still know that Draco was painted in a less than favorable light most of the time.
You made both characters -- in fact all the characters -- more than two-dimensional. They were both realistic and larger-than-life -- everything one needs for a terrific story.
I look forward to reading more works by you. Do you post anywhere else?
Please keep writing -- this story was a true joy to read.
Review By [WmGeorge
] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Scorpio
Just re-read this story again and I loved it as much this time as the very first. Such a wonderful blending of the two different worlds into one single 'verse. Harry & Xander makes such a wonderful couple; each a little broken, a little needy, but determined to hold onto their love no matter the risks. Lovely....just lovely. Bonus that Willow & Hermine get along like a brilliant and brainy house on fire. *grins*
I still think that a sequel would be wonderful. I'd like to see how they handle the whole long-distance relationship thing. Especially if that power-shunt (which if I understand correctly is still in place & runs through them both) has made thier empathic bond permenent. Having the other half (literally) of your soul on the opposite side of the planet would be bad enough. Even worse if something goes horribly wrong; like demon attacks, dark wizard curses, or the occasional naughty dream. *grins*
Please just consider it?
Anyway. This story is one of my all-time favs.
Review By [Scorpio
] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from kayron
I'm so glad that they didn't break up!! Great story! I read it in one sitting!
Review By [kayron
] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from DarkFaerieYumi
Beautiful! Wonderful! Lovely! I loved it! Sqee!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from spring
This is so beyond wonderful I just don't have the words for how much I love this story. Please continue writing such wonderful stories.
Review By [spring
] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from LadySybyl
Fascinating ending... It really rings true to Xander's character, and I would love to see a sequel story or even a series of "oneshots" or drabble stories telling how they coped with Xan in Africa and Harry in England.
This was a great story thank you!
Review By [LadySybyl
] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from inarae
Very nice. The pacing and story structure came together like clockwork. I realize that isn't something most authors focus on, so it may not sound important, but it's one of the big differences between a "good" and "just ok" story in my mind. I was very impressed with the way you handled it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Review By [inarae
] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Ansku
Good story :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [12 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from MistieMossflower
This was a very good story. Great work!!
Review By [MistieMossflower
] • Date [16 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from stasa
That was truly beautiful.... :)
Review By [stasa
] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from seri
I loved this.
Review By [seri
] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Duskie
I hope you do a sequel. It was ~so~ good.
I was impressed how you restrained yourself from a lot of the angst most authors would have indulged in at certain points.
hot sex too.
I thought it was a great characterization of Xander.
Most cant not belittle him without giving him powers like hyena, soldier or sight or bashing other characters. This, I never lost my respect of him (or anyone else) or thought any less of him. He also never felt helpless.
Review By [Duskie
] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from AnnF
Would love to see a sequel.
Comments from author:
I've been trying to come up with a good storyline for a sequel, and so far I'm stumped. I do plan to write a one-shot for Sirius and Remus from their youth, as told at the dinner table. Thanks for reviewing and encouraging me!
Review By [AnnF
] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from dmalfoy
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [dmalfoy
] • Date [30 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]