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Review of chapter "Inappropriate Touchin" from darkmagician
Review:
I hope you come back and work on this. Here's a suggestion on seeing more episodes: YouTube. I would've suggested CrunchyRoll, but since it's liscensed, you can't watch it. And they had the entire series too, even the episodes that weren't shown in the US, like Amy's First Love!
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inappropriate Touchin" from darkmagician
Review:
There were a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, but the story itself is pretty good. Since this is happening around the time of Sailor Stars, apparently (Darien goes to college then), I have one question: Where are Amara (aka Haruka, aka Uranus), Michelle (aka Michiru, aka Neptune), Trista (aka Setsuna, aka Pluto) and Hotaru (aka Saturn)? They were back with the rest of the team when Stars happened after the sabbatical between Super and SuperS (they came back in SuperS, all four).
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. *blush* Yeah, this was one of the first stories I'd written and just getting the hang of things.

As for the outer planet sailors-I hadn't seen much of SuperS and only clips of Stars so I did not feel comfortable writing their characters.

I'm not going to finish this story, however. I really enjoyed the idea of it, but the story line got away from me and I haven't even looked at it in so long.


But I really thank you for reviewing *grin* Makes me feel all happy inside.
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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