nice balance of personalities with the point of view and the crossover.
well done, thanks

Totally new view of John. Am kinda pissed at Anita. And Jean-Claude. Assholes.

Sure sounds like a sequel should be made.

Awesome story, just found it again and remembered how much I liked it ;). Not sure if you were planning to write more in this universe, but I love me some Anita Blake/Stargate-ness in my life. Thanks for the great read either way~.

Sequal? pretty please

Loved the story, very nice twist on both parts (SG and Anita). Really enjoyed reading it.

I would never have thought to merge these two worlds, but you have done so seamlessly. I would love to see a sequel to this. Fantastic job!

Absolutely superb. Please write a sequel to this. It's practically begging for one. Please.

Please, Please tell me I'll find a sequel to this when I search your profile *begs* ;D I must say, I am very impressed with how well you wrote 'mini' Jack. I could totally see him as the real deal, he was snarky enough to fit his teen years but not too much. Even Richard was his sometimes annoying self. A hard task that is when you're also trying to make him sympathetic enough for mini Jack to like.

I swear, though, I wasn't sure if mixing SG1 and AB would work but you blended the two very well together. I give this 2 thumbs up!

If I were to choose from among your stories which one I like best, I'd choose this. It is the best portrayal of clone!jack I have ever read, and his presence improves the convoluted Anita verse. I love the fight in the woods, and Richard losing control, and every damn thing.

If there isn't a sequel, just please write more clone!jack fics!

I read this story awhile ago, and got the urge to read it again, and I must say, I love love LOVE it! I love your conflicted mini-Jack, the way that you portray so well the adult in child's body, an adult who was in special ops and has lived a long full life with all the great and terrible experiences that come with it. I hadn't read a mini-Jack story before and haven't found one that I can even compare to this one. So . .. great job and lovely reading. Thanks for giving a story that I can keep coming back to.

Hi ! I've just finished reading your story and I loved it. I'm not reading much of mini-Jack fic but it was good. I like the way you ended it, finished but not quite. Do you plan on a sequel? It would be great. Maybe after finishing Inevitable :p

I think about 5 other people have said it, but you definitely need to write a sequel to this story. All of us fans are waiting on the edges of our seats!

I really loved this story and have to ask if there is any chance of a squeal?!

You know, I would love to see a sequel to this fic :)

*g* would be great for Anita to find out the truth about the norse Gods
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