Good story with a lot of Buffy-style humor. Generally I don't like Kennedy, but you write her believable and nice without being too snarky. Christina is a good start on an interesting character, hope you use her again. I don't understand why your stories get very few reviews, I haven't read a bad story from you yet, actually they are all well written and most have some funny parts to them.
Thanks for posting this story, now on to read the rest of the series.

AHA! You hit the nail on the head in your second sentence...Kennedy! People don't like Kennedy and i can't understand why (well I can but...)?

People don't like Kennedy because she's not Tara and calls Buffy on her bad ideas. Also I think they watched a different season 7 to the one I watched! I recently watched the S7 episodes with Kennedy in them, I can't see where people get their funny ideas about her.

Nowadays I tend to try and hide the fact that a story has Kennedy in it.

Oddly people who do read my Kennedy stories all say the same thing; I write her believably and nice without being over the top (as you put it).

D.

*laughing* Oh, good lord...I just saw your reply that Zimmerman was based on the EMH. No wonder Robert Picardo (the actor who played the Doctor on "Voyager") popped into my mind when I was reading this!

Very much enjoyed this story, even though I'm not familiar with the brothers from "Supernatural". I was a bit disappointed that Will and Ken didn't get to kick some sleazy government agent ass, but I hope you'll let the girls give them their comeuppance eventually. *grinning* Oh, I could so see Daphne as a Scoobie. Loved the setting too, as I used to live in Seattle and still head over there once in a while.

Great stuff, thanks for sharing! :-D

The evil NID/Government types will be back at some point, so they're still in line for bottom kicking! I do want to make more of Daphne (plus Niles and maybe Frasier) at some point but there's no opening for them in any story I'm...Oh I don't know...just had an idea...hang on a minute!

All the best,
Dave T.

You doing great with this series. I only give it a nine for 2 reasons, 1. your putting in alot of crossovers, for most that's just bad news for alot of reasons. And 2, Everyone is kinda acting stupid. I would have thought that the Rosenburgs would be more worried that someone was brainwashing people to attack them, and at least try to find out who it was.

To take your second point first: I was trying for a lighter feel to this story so some plot 'twists' were done for comedic effect only. Also remember for most of the fic W & K didn't know what was actually going on. Now they have been alerted they can keep an eye open for any NID interference. Please note that Willow did help Dean to break the brainwashing, and the Winchesters were only thrown out of the State. This after they had seriously injured a young Slayer! If I'd had been W&K the Boyz would have spent a very long time in a cage going "SQUEAK!"
First point: Too many crossovers. I sometimes forget that people don't always watch the same stuff as I do. However, my intent was to show that TV companies do seem to set a lot of stuff in the Seattle area. THERE MUST BE SOMETHING GOING ON!!!!!!!!
All the best,
Dave T.

An excellent resolution and very satisfactory story. I'm glad to hear we'll see more in this series, I enjoy them a lot myself.

It's great the effort the Winchesters are putting into their delusions. One wonders if they saw a Big Bad, would they remember who to call?

Yours, fastpilot

That's an idea for another time, maybe.
All the best Dave T.

Ok who is Daphne? As for Sam and Dean.... don't forget to add John to the mix. Think how pissed the Slayer might be if they found out what he did to his sons, ie the training they did as children. In someway it's worst than what the old Watchers did to the Slayers. The Watchers weren'ty their fathers

OK what are you planning? Normally I can get into the mind of an auhtor and figure out what is next but this time I'm stumped

Shit the government is going after the boys again!

Not fair to Sam and Dean! They are good hunters

Good one. I hope to read more soon.

LOL at least they're raising the girls right! Ok will Will, Kenndy and Christina listen to what Sam is going? And can Will help Dean?

You'll have to tune in on Friday to find out!
Dave T.

Ok I agreed with Will about the doctor until we got to the last part and then realized he was a good guy but he's still a jerk.

Why of course! He's based loosely on the EMH from Voyager with maybe a touch of House thrown in for good measure.
All thebest,
Dave T.

Why hasn't Sam had any dreams about whats going on?

In the story note at the beginning of the Fic I mention that this is set before Cordy...OH! Sorry Sam starts getting the dreams. Also I've only seen one episode where Sam's dreams have any impact on the storyline so I thought I'd steer clear of them untill I've seen more of them in action.
Talking of dreams, have you noticed Kennedy has never had a prophetic Slayer dream? I'll have to address that.

Now where did I leve that Predator?
Dave.

Someone hates Dean don't they? :)

Anyways it's an interesting story so far. I like the Blinking power the girl has. Not sure it's very cannon :) but it's at least interesting.

I think 'hate' is too stong an emotion for what I think about Dean.

As for the Blinking Power Christina has.

My thought's went like this: The Council didn't really know much about the full powers of Slayers coz they always died so young. As they are 'Vampire' Slayers' wouldn't they develope powers similar to those of vamps? Like that thing some vamps do eg; being able to move instantly from one place to another?
All the best,
Dave T.

Killer visuals throughout. I'm not watching 4400 so these other characters aren't familiar, if they're NID that explaines it. This story is a far cry from light hearted fun in other stories youve done so well this one is just grim.

Grim? I thought I was being 'light hearted'!

The 4400 characters Maia is a 'returnee' and Diana is a Home Security Agent. The NID are just a useful 'Baddie' to throw at people. I think that if they appear in other stories of mine I'll morph them into something even nastier!

All the best,
Dave T.