Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GideonReview:
Great cast of characters you have there, but you named this story well - it is only a Beginning! Do you have any ideas for continuing this story?
Comments from author:
I have a few! But this is realy just a one shot drables drable
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TealThanatosReview:
This was really great, I'd like to see more like it
Review By [
TealThanatos] • Date [29 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
morangeReview:
*steeples fingers* interesting. dun dun dun. lol.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [
morange] • Date [4 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
fastpilotReview:
This is really good, but it does need a middle and an end. In fact, if th emiddle and end live up to this beginning, I'll re-rate this to a 10.
Csuast that last bit with the First's POV, that implies much.
Yours, fastpilot
Comments from author:
I have a few plot bunnies stomping around i need to find the time to tame them, so watch this space
Review By [
fastpilot] • Date [4 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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DaveTurnerReview:
Not a bad 'Beginning' I assume there will be a 'Middle' and an 'End'?
Dave T.
Comments from author:
I'm not to sure if im going to continue this yet
Review By [
DaveTurner] • Date [4 May 06] • Not Rated
