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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from agnar
Review:
I gotta admit I kinda hate this idea. Killing off Angel and powering up Xander so he can help/protect/etc. Buffy I like.

But turning Xander into Angel-lite, meaning he's a REALLY young and thus WEAK and inexperienced vampire with a soul really sucks to me. It means Buffy is still screwing a corpse if they get together, Xander won't have the strength, knowledge, experience, and power that 10 or 20 decades of vampirism would bring, even if he's a master level vamp, it'd be really low end master level because he's just been turned.

He won't have the angst and emo shit Angel had, so that's good at least, but he's still a walking, talking corpse with all the weaknesses of any vamp unless you hand him the gem of amara really early on, and thus even more useless than Angel.

Some other, any other kind of power up but being undead I'd like, just not the normal vampire bit.
Review By [agnar] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from lillyb
Review:
I don't fault you for not updating this story its easy to let things slide when time is short, I just wish it was longer. I love your style and the flow is so good I don't notice a lot of errors. and as for errors I don't really see that many in all honesty. I wonder if you had ever thought of letting someone else take it over or collaborating with some one I don't know if i could do it justice but i have a lot of ideas and some free time right know. Ive never posted one of my stories before but something about this one just will not leave me alone.
Comments from author:
I have no problem with someone taking over one my dead stories. As long as they ask before hand and tell me where to find it. I mean I am basically copying some one else work when I write these characters so who am I to bitch?

I am more than willing to talk over the story with any wanting to take it. now I don't have any notes for it or anything but a basic outline. I was working on this with another writer that has since disappeared so its up for grabs. If you want to take over its yours, Just let me know where to find it. And Good luck with it.

and I will help as much as I can with it,
Review By [lillyb] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from oldgirllost
Review:
I just came accross this and it's a shame it wasn't updated--Your note saying you have no muse and no time was dated almost two years ago. I can understand if the energy and will to update this story and others you've started has gone (damn shame--but I understand it) but you are good and should try something else maybe to get the juices going --- even if you don't ever finish this story -- you're good and I'm sure whatever you did would be a grace...

Thanks
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from Maeven
Review:
LOVELY, HOPE YOU START UPDATING IT AGAIN!
Review By [Maeven] • Date [29 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from Jarvey
Review:
I really hope this gets updated someday. It's very original and has excellent potential. It's been pretty awesome so far as well!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from brujahchilde
Review:
Too bad you haven't finished this. It's one of your best so far.
Comments from author:
thanks. but right now it doesnt seem like ANY story will be updated soon. I have just not felt like writing and with no time to write on top of it. so no story.
Review By [brujahchilde] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from OLazyOne
Review:
Very good work. I love the fact that not only did you place Xander in Angel's role with in well-written way by your also not just rehashing the series. Faith's portrayal was done splendidly. I read some of your reviews so I know you still plan on writing when you get a chance and I'm glad to hear it. This is a marvelous read.

Some of the spelling and grammar is off true. HOWEVER, it's not enough to distract from the wonderful read the story is.
Comments from author:
thanks. this is another one I plan on getting back to. but not enough time in the day. Sorry about the spelling and grammar, I do try and and have a really nice guy check it over. but mistakes still happen.
Review By [OLazyOne] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from QundraDraconum
Review:
Ive read Vampire Xander stories before but this one is definitly the best written one and most original one I've seen. You have a good idea here that could go interesting places. I hope you continue it someday.
Comments from author:
I do plan on it but I havent the time I used to have to write
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from AnthonyR
Review:
i got about a quarter way through the 2nd chapter before i had to stop. the story's interesting, but you REALLY need edit this and work on the grammar and proper spelling. i know your capable of it, ive read some of your other stories.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [21 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
Great stuff!!! I love the twist on reality...aces!


Cheers,
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from mizzadmaria
Review:
very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. =)
Comments from author:
Thanks, will be working on some of my WIP in the future. just not a lot of time on my hands to write.
Review By [mizzadmaria] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part three" from Bobboky
Review:
i can't believe that Xander died and became the Black Knight. "it's just a flesh wound"

excellent work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three" from manic
Review:
I hope this isn't the end!! I'm glad Faith has a fighting chance now. I still kinda like the idea of Faith and Xander, even though this is Buffy/Xander. Oh, and it's cool to see Jessie become a Scooby. Is he destined to field all the crap Xander would have?
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from manic
Review:
I'm enjoying the story, but it is very difficult to read because of the grammar and punctuation mistakes. There are also many misspelled words.
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from manic
Review:
Neat concept. Can't wait to read the next 2 chapters.
Review By [manic] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Not Rated
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