I don't fault you for not updating this story its easy to let things slide when time is short, I just wish it was longer. I love your style and the flow is so good I don't notice a lot of errors. and as for errors I don't really see that many in all honesty. I wonder if you had ever thought of letting someone else take it over or collaborating with some one I don't know if i could do it justice but i have a lot of ideas and some free time right know. Ive never posted one of my stories before but something about this one just will not leave me alone.

I have no problem with someone taking over one my dead stories. As long as they ask before hand and tell me where to find it. I mean I am basically copying some one else work when I write these characters so who am I to bitch?

I am more than willing to talk over the story with any wanting to take it. now I don't have any notes for it or anything but a basic outline. I was working on this with another writer that has since disappeared so its up for grabs. If you want to take over its yours, Just let me know where to find it. And Good luck with it.

and I will help as much as I can with it,

I just came accross this and it's a shame it wasn't updated--Your note saying you have no muse and no time was dated almost two years ago. I can understand if the energy and will to update this story and others you've started has gone (damn shame--but I understand it) but you are good and should try something else maybe to get the juices going --- even if you don't ever finish this story -- you're good and I'm sure whatever you did would be a grace...

Thanks

LOVELY, HOPE YOU START UPDATING IT AGAIN!

I really hope this gets updated someday. It's very original and has excellent potential. It's been pretty awesome so far as well!

Too bad you haven't finished this. It's one of your best so far.

thanks. but right now it doesnt seem like ANY story will be updated soon. I have just not felt like writing and with no time to write on top of it. so no story.

Very good work. I love the fact that not only did you place Xander in Angel's role with in well-written way by your also not just rehashing the series. Faith's portrayal was done splendidly. I read some of your reviews so I know you still plan on writing when you get a chance and I'm glad to hear it. This is a marvelous read.

Some of the spelling and grammar is off true. HOWEVER, it's not enough to distract from the wonderful read the story is.

thanks. this is another one I plan on getting back to. but not enough time in the day. Sorry about the spelling and grammar, I do try and and have a really nice guy check it over. but mistakes still happen.

Ive read Vampire Xander stories before but this one is definitly the best written one and most original one I've seen. You have a good idea here that could go interesting places. I hope you continue it someday.

I do plan on it but I havent the time I used to have to write

i got about a quarter way through the 2nd chapter before i had to stop. the story's interesting, but you REALLY need edit this and work on the grammar and proper spelling. i know your capable of it, ive read some of your other stories.

Great stuff!!! I love the twist on reality...aces!


Cheers,
MJ

very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. =)

Thanks, will be working on some of my WIP in the future. just not a lot of time on my hands to write.

i can't believe that Xander died and became the Black Knight. "it's just a flesh wound"

excellent work

I hope this isn't the end!! I'm glad Faith has a fighting chance now. I still kinda like the idea of Faith and Xander, even though this is Buffy/Xander. Oh, and it's cool to see Jessie become a Scooby. Is he destined to field all the crap Xander would have?

I'm enjoying the story, but it is very difficult to read because of the grammar and punctuation mistakes. There are also many misspelled words.

Neat concept. Can't wait to read the next 2 chapters.

~This time, I got Two count them two people to read over it.~

And it's much better for it :-) I'm really not enamoured of the PTB, but then I don't imagine I'm supposed to be.

Thanks. I do try. as for the PTB I have always seen them acting this way. helping out, as long as you worked their way. Buffy never really went along with them. she was always doing things her own way. so Far Xander is doing what they want so they give him nice things.