A fascinating beginning - I really want to know what happens to the inner-Dawn, and whether the Dawn-ness has sufficient access to the Key to be able to 'fix' things, since I don't particularly see the Key as having any interest in the minutae of human existence, more a universal perception.
Glad to see you back and posting - I'd better check out your other fics for updates.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [5 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well definetly a fascinating start, it kinda sounds like the Key IS the Force on some level from what you wrote. Or perhaps its concious will or something like that? Would like to see this continued!
Review By [Xelab] • Date [4 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]