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Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from Ishikawa
Review:
I really love Mini-Jack Stories and this is one of the best i have come across yet. Keep on going, i would just love to see more of this.
The Idea of Thor beaming him up to his ship is kinda fun, really like that. But i guess i have to just keep wondering until there is more to read. PLEASE!!! Write more :)

The rating is a clear 10 just because i want more and i really love jacks reaction, i wonder if the slayers ever figure out what he meant. That would be cool... too bad the Meeting Dawn/Jack figuring out they're both 2 Years is already done, would have been fun too.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [14 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from manic
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This was great! At first, I had been avoiding this story because of the name in the description, Jonathon Jackson, made me think this was a "children of SG1, from natural or artificial means" story. I was pleasantly surprised that it was a mini-me story. I really like the idea of mini-me joining another fight and finding another higher purpose. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [manic] • Date [21 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from RevDorothyL
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What a great description of Jack: "He can totally deal." And thanks again for the fun and intriguing possibilities in this story and its sequel. I can't get enough of Mini-Jack and the school for Slayers.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from debio
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I am SO liking this story!!! More please!?! I love it that Jack is going to have a calling to help him get over the fact that he's no longer with the SGC.
Review By [debio] • Date [11 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from Vld
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I know I may repeat myself, but I have to say it, since it IS probably the best review I could come up with right now: SEQUEL!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!
Review By [Vld] • Date [10 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from arkeus
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nice. very. Go jack, though i wonder if he is a xander or someone who has mojo
Review By [arkeus] • Date [10 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from alexceasar
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Great work. I really enjoyed how you wrote Jack. Very nice. Good characterization. I love mini-Jack. I think he would be perfect to fit into the new group of Slayers. Someone their own age with the life experiance that would help him be able to deal with it all. Anyway, I really enjoyed it.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from Bugeyedmonster
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"He’d make sure his girls got to be kids too. He turned over and drifted off to sleep, never realizing he’d just claimed that wild pack of girls as his."

Awwwwwwwwww....

That's soo Jack. Love Jack's reaction to being chosen as a Scooby. LOL! Yeah, weird in his life is normal. But that line is soo Jack. I can see "his" girls calling him Uncle Jack or refering to him as their big brother. Jack is great with kids and very protective. With that special ops training he's perfect for the role. Keep writing!

Oh, if you want, I can send you the link for the Mini-Jack group on yahoo. Or you can look it up. You can post this fic there as well.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from TarnishedGold
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I just love this story. It so fits mini jack. Keep up the good work.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from banner
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I gather that the Scoobies *don't* know what Jack is? And how did he find out about the school? Is the SGC going to be checking up on miniJack?

This is fun!
Review By [banner] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from DeeRose
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oh, I really liked this. I'm glad you listened to who ever said you needed to write more. The first chapter was also excellent but didn't feel complete. While this was a good place to pause I hope you decide to write more. I would love to see the stories of how Jack helps 'his girls' stand up to the pressures and duties in their lives with out being over run by them. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from PhilH
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Great story, with a great ending. I'm torn between two things I'd be tempted to say to Jack tho. One is "good job Jack!" and the other is "Sucker!!" Seriously, I think this is the first time I've seen a group of junior slayers trying to get their own Xander, and I think its a great concept! (tho rather harder to actually accomplish)

While this was a good stopping point, if there is more I'd love to see it!

Phil
Comments from author:
You're review made me do a happy dance! LOL - "Sucker!" indeed. : }
Review By [PhilH] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from dragonfan
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Oh. Oh, just wonderful! And you totally have his voice right! I just don't have the words to how good this is! And yes, he would adopt those girls without thinking about it!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind words.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Upside Down and Inside Out" from VillageOrchid
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Squee... thanks for continuing the story. I didn't expect you'd put any of the briefing in based on the story pacing, but I'm glad you put some of it in. Did Jack get a slide show with images of deamons from their book collection?
Comments from author:
The orientation is a lot for anyone to swallow. So I'm thinking he might have more flashbacks to the orientation in other installments. We'll have to see. : )
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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