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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work! Hope there's more soon!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from WannaBeSlayerWitch
Review:
i really like it
But Buffster has some very very braty moments, and the whole I'm the slayer then i'm better than you is really annoying when shes still so young season 5 and after sure totally, she is all powerful w/e
But right now totally agitating. Anyways love the fic, love Dean, love Sam
Love the fic
update soon please
Review By [WannaBeSlayerWitch] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from candydreamer
Review:
Awesome!
Review By [candydreamer] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Good Story so far, I hope you continue it.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [26 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Winchestergrl
Review:
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Review By [Winchestergrl] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Lisa
Review:
Giles is my favorite watcher too!! Nice chapter!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Past Donor)zoev
Review:
This is a really great story, and I’m really looking forward to more interaction between Buffy and her brothers, since they haven’t really had many chances to talk yet. Being stuck alone in a car should be an interesting experience for them all and I cannot wait for Buffy’s strength to return. Is Dean going to have to put up with two super-powered siblings, when he himself is normal?

I love the Buffy/Sam interaction, or the hints of it shown here. It looks like Sam finally has somebody who’ll take his side in an argument, probably refuse to follow John’s orders and disagrees with the way that John treats his children. Plus Sam and Buffy can have lots of chick flick moments in front of Dean. How cute could they be if they were trying to annoy him?

When I read that line “So the big ‘L’ on your forehead doesn’t just stand for loser but liar too, huh?” I got the idea stuck in my head. So please can you let Buffy write that on his head sometime when he’s sleeping (in very permanent marker). Please, please, please.

Also, if they’re having awkward silences in the car, Buffy could always mention that she killed Hansel and Gretal the week before (I’m not trying to tell you what to write, but I’m watching my way through season 3 of Buffy and it is set only a week before Helpless). That would certainly be an interesting story to share.
Review By [(Past Donor)zoev] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from KnightOwl
Review:
That was a good chapter! I can't wait to see Buffy on a hunt with her brothers. I'm sure Dean will still be trying to protect her and I hope Buffy shows him she kicks ass. I am really looking forward to the next part!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Chosenfire
Review:
Oh my you are handling this perfectly, I can't wait to see the rest of this story and I DESPERATELY hope that the boys stick around and play out the rest of the season with Buffy and that John appears, better yet have them take her with them or something I just would love to see John's reaction to his baby girl having more power than the family combined (barring Sammy ofcourse cause hes all psychic), can't wait for the next chapter and this story is amazing.

Great job :D
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CousinMary
Review:
This is such a great story! I love it!
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Lisa
Review:
OH Buffy she may be a girl but she can still cause damage even without her slayer strength. Great chapter! Glad to see this was updated.
Review By [Lisa] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Awesome chapter! But you know, taken out of context, all those bits about Sam and Dean tying each other up could sound very naughty! lol More soon, please?
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Lisa
Review:
MUHAHAHAHA!!! I loved this episode when she out-smarted the crazy vampire. Great re-write of the scene. Looking forward to more!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Chosenfire
Review:
Oh C'mon you can't stop there, well you did but there has to be more please, that was great and amazing and highly entertaining. I loved this chapter and can't wait to see the next one, SOON lol.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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