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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Elleria
Review:
More as soon as you can please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [8 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ChaosRonin
Review:
I like the start of how this went although would be nice if chapters got bigger ^_^ Hm seems like Xander has been at this for awhile but wheres Tara and Spike if he isn't already a crispy critter?
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from tremerid
Review:
Well, you've got me thinking... but there's one thing I'm hoping will be explained in the following chapters. You see, mission and zalbaar, are from four thousand years before the phantom menace, if I'm remembering time-lines right... Now, I'm not saying this is bad, as a matter of fact i found this chapter rather interesting, though there were a few spots where you missed a word, or substituted one word for a similar word, like at the end when you were talking about the engines spooling up, you used Where instead of "were ready". Granted this is just a minor issue, and not really much of a problem since we generally read portions of words, and the meaning was clear. Anyway, keep up the great work Mister/Missy author-person. :) I wanna see what happens, and I'm wondering if a certain HK series droid will be poking his somewhat .... eccentric actuators into things.

-tremerid
Review By [tremerid] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from NoLifeKing
Review:
You caught my interest. :-)
Now I wonder where this will go.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [7 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, I am totally confused. But also intrigued. I hope you write more so we can find out what the heck is going on. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 May 06] • Not Rated
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