Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from insomniareader
Please update? :( You left off at the really good part... well every part s really good, but you ended at the awesome verbal explosions... I love explosions... :D
Review By [insomniareader
] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from musumenosuoh
damn. sorry bout your sister. hope everything's ok with being a new mommy and all. good luck!
Review By [musumenosuoh
] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from msdarque
Awesome, intriguing story... I've enjoyed reading it a lot.
I'd definitely like to read more and see how Xander adjusts, what others in Miami think of him...
Sorry to hear about your sister. Hope things are bit better.
Review By [msdarque
] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DrPepper
Hey, don't worry about explaining what's going on. Family is obviously the First Priority, to make a bad pun. I'm sorry about your sister and wish the best for you and her kids. I'm nearly 21 and it looks like I might be getting custody of a four-year-old relative soon, as his mother really isn't coping, so you're not alone there. Going from being the cool Auntie to a parental figure, changing your entire life like that, is difficult. To repeat myself, I wish you all the best. This is a great story and you'll continue it when you *can*. Time is a luxury with children in the mix.
Review By [DrPepper
] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from ebony
Trust me I'll be hanging around because I want to see the confrontation between Demon and the Scoobies and Cordelia's reaction when she gets back. Also the whole Angel/Angelus remark that Devon made, what happens when he comes back?
Review By [ebony
] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DarkFaerieYumi
hope everythings going well for you.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from kayron
I tend to come back to stories that I really like, and check on them to see if there were any updates. I was surprised and pleased to see the Author's Note for 'First Priority'. I just read it AGAIN. I think that it is a great story, and I'm glad that it will be continued. Believe me I understand that real life takes prescedence. It has to. As a fan of your story, I am glad that you will be continuing 'First Priority', because I am really looking forward to seeing how Xander's new life will develop. How will his uncle take Xander's quirks/additions. From what Devon and his mom were discussing, Xander has integrated the Soldier and Hyena, and he has become enhanced. I 'm curious about how Xander will get along with his new (potential) extended family in Miami. I wonder how the Scoobies will react when they find out what Devon and Joyce have to say to them. I wonder if they will realize what they have done in driving Xander away, or if they will just be all self righteous. They still have to face the Mayor. Xander was an important part of that fight. Even though they named Xander 'the Zeppo' and 'donut boy', he was a lot of help to the group. Will they even notice a difference in the lack of his contribution? See I, like a lot of others I'm sure, have a lot interest in this story. So, I can be quite patient while waiting for you to have time to get back to writing. I consider it worth the wait.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Alexandra
Very good story. I really want to see the gang's reaction when Devon will tell them everything. Also I want to see Joyce's reaction when she'll found out what the gang did.:)
Review By [Alexandra
] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from lothlorien
great story. i'm glad you won't be leaving it unfinished. just take your time and post when you're ready
Review By [lothlorien
] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from morgannac
Great story! Once real life calms down I look forward to you continuing the story. I really liked Xander's voice and I loved the scene in the house with the nurses.
Review By [morgannac
] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from mikmat
This is a great story. I hope Oz joins with Xander and the others learn a lesson about arrogance especially Giles and Buffy. Giles should know better and teach Buffy she is not the center of the universe.
Review By [mikmat
] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from kayron
Response to author's note: Believe me we all know how Real Life can get crazy. Being a new parent to two toddlers must be frantic and terrifying! The things that toddlers can get into! My three year old figured out how to unlock the front door, and she was teaching her two year old brother! I now have additional safety locks. It is good of you to even think about continuing your stories with your new responsibilities. We, your readers, enjoy your stories (I know that I do) and look forward to them continuing. I hope that you find enjoyment and relaxation in them too. Thanks for the author's note.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Mwhahahaha
I definatly like this story...its one of the better ones that I've read so far and I really hope that you come back to it. I really want to read more of it!
Review By [Mwhahahaha
] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from CronosKitty
aww this was a bad place to leave it. I was looking forward to Devon telling the gang about him and Xan. Any chance of you picking it back up? I hope so I really liked this story.
Review By [CronosKitty
] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bex
(Pout) Please? I just reread this and I want more? (another pout)
Review By [bex
] • Date [28 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]