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Review of chapter "Gallery" from KevinSchultz
Review:
Fun story - minor quibble, though - this is listed as a crossover with Buffy, but I didn't actually find any in there. Did I miss a minor quote, or is the story mislabled? (Either way it was a fun read, though)

EDIT... OK, duh. For some reason, that COMPLETELY skipped my mind when I wrote this. Ah, well.
Comments from author:
Buffy and Angel are labeled as one universe on the site, so the trip to Pylea counts as the crossover. There isn't a specific choice of "Angel crossover."

Thanks for commenting and glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [4 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gallery" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the sequel I have enjoyed this story immensly. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [30 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gallery" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Sadfru
Review:
would have thought Saverock (spelling?) would have been less then forgiving especially at being bested in any case looking forward to more :)
Comments from author:
True, he's likely handling it badly, but he has no moral compass. All he knew as "right" was that he was the next Lord of Murder. Once he was killed he lost all sense of what was right or wrong even according to his own viewpoint of might makes right. He relies totally on Darius to literally tell him what to do.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [28 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet, i hope to see more very soon
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Sadfru
Review:
Really enjoyed this and hope for more soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [28 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Between" from mecella
Review:
I've enjoyed this story thoroughly since it's been posted and hope to read more soon :)
K, just had 2 questions about the people mentioned on the passing worlds in 'Between.' I got the Star Wars, Aliens, and Superman references but who/what were a "metal man fought another in defense of a young boy." The other mention that i'm unclear on is the girl who stuck her tongue out at them. I was thinking River from Serenity (sounded like something she could and would do) but then I'm short 1 on companions (Mal, Jayne, Zoe, Wash, Simon, Kaylee, and Inara. . . oh wait. .just remembered Book, n/m :) Ok then, was it Serenity? All i really know about the show is what i've read in fanfiction so i could be wrong.
Anyways, keep up the good work. Hope to read more from you soon.
Comments from author:
You're right about the girl being River, as for the metal man... Terminator 2 of course :)
Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [mecella] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet, i loved your Fred
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from skynetgol
Review:
i like how magic works in yor story and the stargate stuff you add it was cool your story is really good and hope to read more soon
Review By [skynetgol] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from skynetgol
Review:
love this story hope to read more soon
Comments from author:
Glad you like it! I'm slightly ahead of schedule (I think) so the next part should be up by saturday at the earliest instead of my usual monday.
Review By [skynetgol] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Elleria
Review:
More soon please!
Comments from author:
Glad you're still enjoying it :)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from MerleCorey
Review:
Wow, I somehow managed to overlook the first five chapters of this story going up. On the other hand, I had the pleasant experience of reading all six tonight, so I can't really complain.

Your SG1 and Fred characterizations seem fairly spot on. (Can't really say much about the F:TLC characterization, but it certainly seems to be in the spirit of the game.)

I look forward to more of this story in the future.
Comments from author:
Yep, I've actually been experimenting with uploading chapters at different times so my story stays near the top longer :D.

Glad you think they're spot on, I was a bit worried that I was getting Fred wrong.
The Fable characters were fairly difficult though, Theresa, while playing a central role in the game doesn't have a terrible lot to say and the player character says nothing! Luckily I have the habit of creating my own dialog in my head when that happens.

Getting close to the end now though, well for this part of the story at least. Part two and three and many drabbles await me.
Review By [MerleCorey] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice :)

Any chance of the Tok'ra checking out Pylea in a few months?


Cool ;)
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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