Interesting but choppy. Will the rest of the story be flashbacks of what happened to Xander or will he go forward with his experience and weapons only revealing bits of his adventure?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
A cliff hanger like that should only be left so high cause there is so much more to come. Anise has gone too far, way too far. Xander's revenge should be very very creative, and possibly delayed by Hellmouthy events. You have so much to play with in this story, I'm wondering first what's the contents of his gear, how he will interact further with J & K, what skills he possesses and how will they effect cannon, how long will re-acclimation take and will he ever get to SGC.
Review By [XanLickquidluv] • Date [26 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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