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Review of chapter "CH119 - Adam 1.0" from StargatePrime
Review:
I hope you haven't abandoned this story, because WOW! I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I usually don't do Harry Potter stories but this one has not only captured my interest but kept it for all 119 chapters.

I haven't been this interested in a story since I read "The 8th Chevron and Everything Afterwards" by Ford B. And that was 145 chapters long.

Please find it in yourself to continue this story. It would be such a waste of a great story to not have it finished.
Review By [StargatePrime] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH119 - Adam 1.0" from ozseaside
Review:
worth the wait and I hope you keep going.
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH119 - Adam 1.0" from Shinigamimaru
Review:
Absolutely loved it. It took me 4 days of non stop reading to finish it. Love Adam normally original characters ruin a story but he just added to it. Noticed you haven't updated in a while so please update I'm so looking foreward to what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm currently trying to write a bit of original fiction as such this has been put on hold for a while, especially as its been so many months since I actually looked at this story that I will need to reread it to remember what I wrote for this and what are memories of stories that I have read
Review By [Shinigamimaru] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH119 - Adam 1.0" from Razial
Review:
great to see an update for this I was beginning to worry you had abandoned it.

david
Review By [Razial] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH1 - Guardian?" from DesitaniaF
Review:
Thought you might like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvDrhKJRQBk
Comments from author:
I like, thanks for the link
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH118 - Pain, Death & Despair" from sdavidm
Review:
This is an imaginative and epic story! Just a brief comment on grammar: the majority of the commas you use should be periods. You've also occasionally used the wrong word, eg. 'sealing' instead of 'ceiling', 'starring' instead of 'staring', 'loosing' instead of 'losing'. These are fairly common fanfic errors though, but the comma abuse is quite distracting, so if you want to fix one thing, I'd say focus on that.

But don't take this as discouragement! Far from it, I'm just trying to help you make a good story even better. :-)
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH118 - Pain, Death & Despair" from Razial
Review:
This is a great story and one I have followed for a while and I hope you get around to finishing it off soon as I would love to see how it all comes to an end.

david
Review By [Razial] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH118 - Pain, Death & Despair" from Obsidian
Review:
awesome update, thanks! Hope to see more soon!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH86 - The Balance Of Power" from lillyb
Review:
I know you wrote this long before I'm reviewing but I wined for more Ron and here he is. i should have had more faith...now to Xander:) lol seriously great work.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH75 - Spiders, Centaurs & Metamorph’s" from lillyb
Review:
I just found this story and am trying to catch up so I haven't reviewed until know. even though my two favorite characters are all but absent (Ron and Xander)I love this story. I know Ron is still there but a bit player, I usually like stories where Xander is the hero and Weasley is our king, but I really do love the way you write.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "CH110 - Body & Soul" from TDWidow
Review:
Was that an elvish inscription? I'm reading another story where Buffy's in Middle Earth and they call her the Dagnir. Just wondering!
Comments from author:
yes it is well spotted, what was the story by the way?
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH104 - The Beast Inside" from TDWidow
Review:
It would have been fantastic if Xander's animagus form had been a hyena! :-)
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [15 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH118 - Pain, Death & Despair" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, you are back and it is nice that you inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Coconut rice::

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The most likely way for the world to be destroyed, most
experts agree, is by accident. That's where we come in;
We're computer professionals. We cause accidents.
- Nathaniel Borenstein
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH118 - Pain, Death & Despair" from slmncpm
Review:
yay! i am glad you are back! *hands you tea and scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CH1 - Guardian?" from (Recent Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I apologize if this isn't the right forum to say this.

buffyrazz - I give what I want, as a writer. Constructive criticism that is more precise than, "U rokkk!", or "This sux!" is scarcer than hen's teeth in the world of fanfic. The fact is, I found the author's use of a Mary Sue (and the Guardian is the EXACT definition of such, at least to the point that I read) had so thrown off any enjoyment in the work or compassion for the characters that I felt he wasted the rest of his writing, however good or bad. If it was an aberration, then he needs to work on his intro. If not, then we disagree about what a good fic should be.

I like reading good fics, and so it's my responsibility to give my opinion when someone has put that amount of work in.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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